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The day of family, love and fidelity The day of family, love and fidelity is celebrated today in Russia. This feast day was started to celebrate only eight years ago. Also today people remember saints Peter and Fevronia of Murom. Peter and Fevronia lived in the 13th century in an old Russian town - Murom. They became the embodiment of fidelity, love and happiness. They loved each other so much and they asked to bury their in a common coffin. They died in one day and in one hour. But they were buried in different coffins. However, the next day people discovered their bodies in a common coffin. It was a miracle! Nothing could separate them! The symbol of this celebration is a white daisy. A white daisy symbolizes love, innocence and pureness of heart.

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The day of family, love and fidelity

The day of family, love and fidelity is celebrated today in Russia. This feast day was started only eight years ago.
Also today people remember the saints Peter and Fevronia of Murom. Peter and Fevronia lived in the 13th century in an old Russian town - Murom. They became the embodiment of fidelity, love and happiness. They loved each other so much that they asked to be buried in the same common coffin. They died within one day and one hour of each other but they were buried in different coffins. However, the next day people discovered their bodies in a common coffin. It was a miracle! Nothing could separate them!
The symbol of this celebration is a white daisy. A white daisy symbolizes love, innocence and pureness of heart.

Very well written! It reminds me of Heloise and Abelard in Paris.

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The day of family, love, and fidelity

The day of family, love, and fidelity is celebrated today in Russia. This feast day was started to celebrate only eight years ago. This celebration began only eight years ago. Also, today people remember saints Peter and Fevronia of Murom. Peter and Fevronia lived in the  during the 13th century in an old Russian town - Murom. They became the embodiment of fidelity, love, and happiness. They loved each other so much and that they asked to bury their  be buried in a common coffin. They died in one day and in one hour within the same hour on the same day, but they were buried in different coffins. However, the next day people discovered their bodies in a common coffin. It was a miracle! Nothing could separate them!
The symbol of this celebration is a white daisy. A white daisy symbolizes love, innocence, and pureness of heart.


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Fantastic entry! You have a good grasp on the English language, keep up the good work!

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Frank, yes, it's a wonderful celebration :)
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What a beautiful celebration!))

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