Thanks for the honest comment Jun! Actually, I hadn't got my thoughts clear yet, so I'll do it in English first before doing it in Japanese haha. I'll give it a retry!

A candid comment from a reader: "実力" is such an abstract word, and just keeping saying "実力" doesn't make clear what you really meant by "実力" in the given context. Accordingly, it's not quite clear what you are trying to say with this text. If what you are trying to say is unclear, it is very difficult to make suggestions about hot to say it, because what to say and how to day should go hand in hand. I guess, that's why nobody put corrections/comments before me. So, my only suggestion here is to add English text to your Japanese text, so that the reader can understand your message. Then, some suggestions could be made about how to say. Hoping I'm not hurting your feeling. I've made this comment because I would be happier to have somebody's candid comment than having no response from people, if I were you. What do you think?