The coolest weather
I just have had dinner,the weather was starts to rain.''ahh...nice--"my dad said.oh,I forget,it's summer now.''Finally,I love rainy days.'' I said.''Hey,son''my dad said.''I think running with this weather will be cool.'' ''oh NO,''said my mom.''I'm not going to let my son to have a cold.'' ''That's nothing,he's a boy.A boy is gong to be exciting.''said my dad.''Ok,I'll leave it up to you.''my mom said with sigh.''Let's go,son.It will be fun.'' ''alright,let's go!''I said
minutes later,we arrive a sports field where near our house.the wind was strong,and it's raining hard."Wow,so cooooooool!" "Let's run!''said my dad.we have run around the sports field for two laps.''What's the feels like of running with barefoot?"I said."do you want to try it?''my dad asks,"YEAH!I think it will be excited.''I said."Alright,but it will be pain.'' "No problem,''I said."I'm a MAN.'' "Ha ha,that's my boy!''my dad said happily.Then,we run by barefoot across the sports field until we got tired.
"Hey,dad.'' "What?" "I feel a tired.I want to go home." "But it's cool outside."my dad said."But someone is waiting us!" "who?" "do you forget it?A BIG SWEET WATERMELON !"I said.
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I had just finished dinner when the weather changed and it started to rain. ''Ah...nice." my dad said. Oh,I forgot, it's summer now. ''Finally, I love rainy days.'' I said.'
'Hey,son." my dad said. ''I think running in this weather would be cool.'' ''Oh no!'' said my mom. ''I'm not going to let my son catch a cold.'' ''That's nothing, he's a boy. A boy is going to do exciting things'' said my dad. ''Okay, I'll leave it up to you.'' my mom said with sigh.' 'Let's go, son. It will be fun.'' ''alright,let's go!'' I said.
A few minutes later, we arrived at a sports field near our house. The wind was strong, and it was raining hard. "Wow, so cooooooool!" "Let's run!'' said my dad. We ran around the sports field for two laps.
''What's it feel like running barefoot?" I asked. "Do you want to try it?'' my dad asked, "YEAH! I think it will be exciting.'' I said. "Alright, but it will be painful.'' "No problem" I said. "I'm a MAN.'' "Ha ha, that's my boy!'' my dad said happily. Then, we ran barefoot across the sports field until we got tired.
"Hey, dad.'' "What?" "I feel tired. I want to go home." "But it's cool outside." my dad said. "But someone is waiting on us!" "who?" "did you forget ?A BIG SWEET WATERMELON !" I said.
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Here's a correction Arthur :)
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