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What motivates me What motivates me the most is the ability to build a career. Another motivating factor for me is a support of people who I work with or make any project with. Because it's a well-known fact that no one achieve success independently and mostly our effectivness depends on our collegues. I believe that showing support is a sign of professionalism and leadership qualities of a person. So the second factor is a professional team. I would like to fit in a team of professionals and establish good relationship on at my workplace. Besides, I know some companies have highly competitive work environment. I prefer to work in such environment where employees could learn and have a right for a mistake. Because in such environment collegues can have an open dialogue. And I love to learn new things. Even in my leasure time I learn a lot. Sometimes I study computer programmes online, but my real passion are foreign languages and I also like reading articles on management and psychology.

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What motivates me

What motivates me the most (you can say, "more than anything else") is the ability to build a career. Another motivating factor for me is a to support of people who with whom I work with or make any manage projects with. Because it's a well-known fact that no one achieves success independently on their own and mostly our effectiveness depends on our colleagues. I believe that showing support is a sign of professionalism and leadership qualities of in a person. So the second factor is a professional team. I would like to fit in be part of a team of professionals and establish good relationships on at my workplace.
Besides Furthermore, I know some companies have function in a highly competitive work environment. I prefer to work in such an environment where employees could can learn and have a right for a are allowed to make some mistakes. Because in such environment collegues can have an open dialogue.
And I love to learn new things. Even in my leasure leisure time I learn a lot. Sometimes I study computer programmes online, but my real passion are is foreign languages and I also like reading articles on management and psychology.

Good work, Daria. I know that there is a quite lot of yellow ink, but in fact you wrote the piece fluently and naturally. Many of my changes are only suggested improvements. I highlighted "with whom" in blue, because many native English speakers do not like this construction, preferring your version. "With whom" is more complicated, but more correct.

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What motivates me

What motivates me the most is the ability to build a career.

Another motivating factor for me is a support of people whom I work with or with whom I'm involved in a project. It's a well-known fact that no one achieve success independently and that our effectiveness depends on our colleagues. I believe that showing support is a sign of professionalism and leadership in a person. The second factor is a professional team. I would like to fit in a team of professionals and establish good relationship at at my workplace.

Regardless, I know some companies have highly competitive work environment. I prefer to work in an environment where employees can learn, and have the right to learn from their mistakes. In such environment colleagues can have an open dialogue.
I love to learn new things; even in my leisure time I learn a lot. Sometimes I study computer programs online, but my real passions are foreign languages and I also like reading articles on management and psychology.

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