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What motivates me
What motivates me the most (you can say, "more than anything else") is the ability to build a career. Another motivating factor for me is a to support of people who with whom I work with or make any manage projects with. Because it's a well-known fact that no one achieves success independently on their own and mostly our effectiveness depends on our colleagues. I believe that showing support is a sign of professionalism and leadership qualities of in a person. So the second factor is a professional team. I would like to fit in be part of a team of professionals and establish good relationships on at my workplace.Besides Furthermore, I know some companies have function in a highly competitive work environment. I prefer to work in such an environment where employees could can learn and have a right for a are allowed to make some mistakes. Because in such environment collegues can have an open dialogue.
And I love to learn new things. Even in my leasure leisure time I learn a lot. Sometimes I study computer programmes online, but my real passion are is foreign languages and I also like reading articles on management and psychology.
Good work, Daria. I know that there is a quite lot of yellow ink, but in fact you wrote the piece fluently and naturally. Many of my changes are only suggested improvements. I highlighted "with whom" in blue, because many native English speakers do not like this construction, preferring your version. "With whom" is more complicated, but more correct.
What motivates me
What motivates me the most is the ability to build a career.Another motivating factor for me is a support of people whom I work with or with whom I'm involved in a project. It's a well-known fact that no one achieve success independently and that our effectiveness depends on our colleagues. I believe that showing support is a sign of professionalism and leadership in a person. The second factor is a professional team. I would like to fit in a team of professionals and establish good relationship at at my workplace.
Regardless, I know some companies have highly competitive work environment. I prefer to work in an environment where employees can learn, and have the right to learn from their mistakes. In such environment colleagues can have an open dialogue.
I love to learn new things; even in my leisure time I learn a lot. Sometimes I study computer programs online, but my real passions are foreign languages and I also like reading articles on management and psychology.
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