My first Car
One month ago, I had a transit accident and the insurance company gave loss total for the car. Thanks to God, My family and I were not injure, It was too fearful since we crushed with a truck without brakes. It was my first car, It was a beautiful blue Ford fiesta 2006 and called "The furious"
Despite the truck driver did not apologize with us, we don´t have any resentment with him since it was a accident , however the police issued him a fine since he was driving a high velocity.
Therefore, I had to look for a new car, because I need getting around the city, since I use to drive one and half hour for the job.
I was looking for three weeks, I bought a beaufitul Hyundai i25. I call it The furious shark.
Thanks for reading. I´m looking forward your corrections.
Regards.
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My First Car
One month ago, I had a car accident and the insurance company gave loss total for deemed the car was damaged beyond repair Thanks to God, my family and I were not injured. It was too a fearful/frightening event since we crushed with into a truck without brakes. It was my first car. It was a beautiful blue Ford Fiesta 2006 and I called it "The furious"Despite the fact that the truck driver did not apologize with to us, we don´t have any resentment with towards him since it was an accident. However, the police issued him a fine (OR...the Police fined him) since he was driving a high velocity. speeding.
Therefore, I had to look for a new car, because I need getting around the city, since I use to drive my commute is one and a half hours for the job.
After I was looking for three weeks, I bought a beautiful Hyundai i25. I call it 'The furious shark."
Thanks for reading. I´m looking forward your corrections.
Regards.
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My first Car
One month ago, I had a transit accident and the insurance company gave loss total for totalled the car. Thanks to Thank God, my family and I were not injured. It was too fearful terrifying since we crushed crashed with into a truck without brakes. It was my first car. It was a beautiful blue Ford fiesta 2006 and called "The furious."Despite Even though the truck driver did not apologize with to us, we don´t have any resentment with resent him since it was a accident. However, the police issued him a fine since he was driving a high velocity speeding.
Therefore, I had to look for a new car because I need getting to get around the city, since I use to drive one and half an hour and a half for the job to get to work.
I was looking looked for three weeks before I bought a beaufitul beautiful Hyundai i25. I call it The Furious Shark.
Thanks for reading. I´m looking forward your corrections.
Regards.
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