Help me fix it, please

And I also chose the watching movies or TV shows way to improve my E speaking skills
I simply put in a movie and watched it. In the beginning of the movie, I watched it with good concentration. Of course, everybody was speaking E and I couldn't understand anything.

So I was watching, but I was watching the pictures, ind of following the story, kind of figuring out, kind of understanding what was happening. I was following the story and attempt to figure out what was happening.

xem hình? khong xem television, hu?

After a while, my energy dropped, my concentration dropped. After a while, my energy and my concentration dropped.

Next, I started getting exhausted also my eyes got a little droopy. However, I did not fall asleep. 

Next I starting to get tired and my eyes got a little droopy. I got drowsy, but I did not fall asleep.

And I started getting tired, my eyes got a little droopy. I got sleepier and sleepier but I didn't fall asleep. I was kind of half awake and half asleep. I think watching movies or TV shows in E like that was a waste of time.

Sao nói quá nhiều em buon ngu? I got sleep...I was half sleepy. troi oi  nói nhiều quá!

mọi người không biết E là gì. Phải E là thuốc uống, illegal drugs like Ecstasy, E-mail, E-services....?

In my opinion, movies and TV shows are possibly a very, very powerful tool for improving E speaking, if we have suitable way
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Help me fix it, please

Hi, Jane.

Firstly, it's a small point, but you should really write, "Hi, guys", with a comma between "Hi" and "guys". This is a common mistake amongst English people. It's a simple error in punctuation. Dear Jane (no comma/apostrophe because "Dear" is an adjective); Hi, Jane (comma or apostrophe present because "Hi" is an interjection). Then the next bit is a new sentence, so it's "Today we are going to talk about a popular topic: learning English. Next sentence is pretty good. Then it's better to write, "I too choose watching movies or TV shows to improve..."  Then I would say, "At the beginning of the movie I watched it with a fair amount of concentration. Of course, everybody was speaking English, and I couldn't understand anything. Next bit is quite good. Strictly speaking it was your eyelids that got a little droopy, not your eyes (which stayed in the same position).  Next bit is good. 

In my opinion, movies and TV shows are possibly a very, very powerful tool for improving English speaking (better maybe to write spoken English, and also TV shows can be a very...., because the other way that you wrote this suggests that even with the very, very you are not quite sure.... Sorry I didn't put all the inverted commas in there!). I'm not sure about what you mean by "if we have suitable way". To be strict, your opinion doesn't agree with your experience; so what would be a suitable way to watch movies and TV shows that would provide a powerful tool for improving your spoken English? I am intrigued to know how you would answer that last question. I have my own thoughts, though I'm not sure they are that valuable.

Anyway, I liked your blog, Jane. You did well - heading towards advanced level!