San Francisco

It has been 2 months since I came back / returned from San Francisco. It was my first visit there and I fell in love with San Francisco immedately. The city was energetic, yet, peaceful somehow. The people in the city were well-dressed when compared to those in Los Angeles. So many things in San Francisco were very different from Los Angeles. Now, berween S.F. and Sydney, Australia, I am debating as which destination I should spend my holidays.

Good Job! Being a "San Francisican" myself, I am glad to hear that you enjoyed your visit here! I used italics since I am originally from Los Angeles!  I have lived here about 20 years now. I would agree, it is much more peaceful here, somewhat like a suburb, instead of a major city. As to the English, your composition is fine, but you state so many things are different between the two cities, so why not list a few of them? Should you find yourself back in S.F., please let me know, I would enjoy meeting and conversing with you! I hope this helps you! J.