Find a book, copy down that last sentence and use this line as the first line of your story.

After all, tomorrow is another day. After twenty years living on this planet, I have been through almost everything. all kind of stuffs. Suffering fears, love, hurt and tears makes has made me realize that this life is an adventure and I have to build a stable mind to face with the challenges ahead. 
There was a time when I felt completely lost. It was 9 years ago. I was not good at English then but my mom registered me at a specialized English class. My classmates were really good at English since and I was not. I could not catch up with them so I felt extremely stressed. I still remembered me crying and I said to my mom that I did not want to study in that class any longer. However, mommy did not let me transfer to another class. Well, I had no idea that being able to be in that class would help me a lot now. My English has become way more better. 
I realized that everything you do will affects on your future. The hard work of yesterday means a little less worry on tomorrow.

PLEASE HELP ME CORRECT THIS PASSAGE. THANKS A LOT.

I enjoyed reading this.