Sometimes dreams come true

It was the most important moment in his life and the history of all humanity. His spacecraft landed on the planet Saturn. Having imagined that moment so many times in his mind, he was now sitting in the chair and looking at the surface of Saturn through the huge screen of the spacecraft.

He remembered the day when he got fired from his boring office job. He was not a child, but he couldn’t get himself to think about anything other than stars. He was so shy that he couldn’t make himself talk with anyone about it. He asked himself what he had to do now. It seemed It it was time to achieve the dream.

Some days later, he got selected in a team for the flight to Saturn. He didn’t care how much money he would get paid for that. There was only one chance and he couldn’t lose it, despite his dream stealing him from his family.

Recalling all of that, he got outside, set foot on the surface of the planet and felt…nothing.




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