Spring
Spring is coming, it brings warm and gentle breeze, new and green trees, as well as beautilful flowers. Most importantly, it brings hope and courage to our life again. no matter how hard you lived, how upset you uesd to be, how miserable your live was, you could have another chance to get it over and live it again. Please smail and say to yourself, it is spring now, it' s time to be happy now.
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Spring
Spring is coming! It brings warm and gentle breezes, new and green trees, as well as beautiful flowers. Most importantly, it brings hope and courage to our lives again. No matter how hard you have lived, how upset you used to be, or how miserable your life has been, you now have another chance to get over it and liveGood work! I'll explain a few things...
new and green trees - you describe two types of trees here. If you mean the same kind of tree, then use new green trees.
have lived... has been... - the problem with simple past (was, lived) it that it is cut off from the present. By using simple past, you suggest that things are already different, things have already changed... even before spring comes. The present perfect connects the past event to the present, so something that happened is still relevant or still has effect. This is what I think you need. ;)
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Spring
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