Ielts writing practice 0606, please help me to make a correction. Thanks a lot in advance. Dear Bob and Jane, How is everything going these days? I hope it would be fine with all of you. Thank you again for your kindly hospitalities and helps during the tour in Australia last month. I have received those fantastic photos you took for us yesterday. Certainly it will become the most precious memories of this trip. We have just moved to a new apartment last week, which is located in the CBD area and quite near to my office. It took us the whole weekend to clean everything up. Sorry to reply you so late. There are three bedrooms in our new apartment and it is only 5 minutes walking distance to the central subway station which is a easy connection to most scenery attractions and famous historic relics in the city. I know both of you are interested in Chinese traditional architectures, and hope you to visit us in Beijing soon. Look forward to hearing from you. Best regards, Guangyu