My friend's Wedding
Yesterday I went to my friend's wedding. It was a big party, with a beautiful decoration. Amazing! She invited many people and I met many friends that I love so much! We studied together at the university.
Whenever I go to a Wedding, I'm feel extremely moved. One of my favorite moment is: when the bridge goes to altar, while everybody look at her, I look to him, the fiancé, waiting for see his reaction. I reckon so beautiful when they cry
Anyway, It was astonishing and I'm feeling very happy for participate in this moment that was so important to my friend. I hope that they will be happy forever!
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My friend's Wedding
Yesterday I went to my friend's wedding. It was a big party with beautiful decorations. Amazing! She invited many people and I met many friends that I love so much! We studied together at the university.Whenever I go to a wedding, I feel extremely moved. One of my favorite moments is when the bride goes to the altar. While everybody looks at her, I look to him, the fiancé, waiting for see his reaction. I reckon so beautiful when they cry (?)
Anyway, It was astonishing and I'm feeling very happy to participate in this moment that was so important to my friend. I hope that they will live happily ever after!
Very well written!
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My friend's Wedding
Yesterday I went to my friend's wedding. It was a big party, with beautiful décor. Amazing! She invited many people and I met many friends that I love so much! We studied together at the university.
Whenever I go to a wedding, I feel extremely moved. One of my favorite moments was when she walked across the bridge to the altar, while everybody looked at her. I looked at him, the fiancé, waiting to see his reaction. I thought it was so beautiful when they cried
Anyway, It was astonishing and I'm feeling very happy to have participated in this moment that was so important to my friend. I hope that they will be happy forever!
Sounds like it was a good day, keep up the practicing!
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My friend's Wedding
Yesterday I went to my friend's wedding. It was a big party, with beautiful decorations. Amazing! She invited many people and I saw many friends that I loved so much! We studied together at the university.Whenever I go to a Wedding, I feel extremely moved. One of my favorite moments is when the bride goes to the altar, while everybody looks at her. I look to the fiancé, waiting to see his reaction. I reckon so (I don't understand this phrasing, so I don't know how to proof read it) It is sobeautiful when they cry.
Anyway, It was astonishing and I'm feeling very happy for participate in this moment that was so important to my friend. I hope that they will be happy forever!
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