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Final Champions League Hi! My name is Matteo. I live in Turin, and i love football (maybe too much ^^). Since i was 5, i am a supporter of Inter, but when i was 6, i discovered Atletico. I love Madrid, the Spanish culture, and in particulary i love the story of Atletico. Tonight we lost the final, but i want to congratulate with the guys and with the Cholo, because ok, we lost, but i'm proud to be Atleti! Nunca Dejes De Creer.. Between us and Cardiff there are only 12 matches!

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Final Champions League

Hi!
My name is Matteo. I live in Turin, and i love football (maybe too much ^^).
Since i was 5, i am was a supporter of Inter, but when i was 6, i discovered Atletico.
I love Madrid, the Spanish culture, and in particulary i love the story of Atletico.
Tonight we lost the final, but i want to congratulate with the guys and with the Cholo, because ok, we lost, but i'm proud to be Atleti!
Nunca Dejes De Creer.. Between us and Cardiff there are only 12 matches!
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Final Champions League


Hi!


My name is Matteo. I live in Turin, and I love football (maybe too much ^^).
Since I was five, I have been a supporter of Inter, but when I was six, I discovered Atletico.
I love Madrid, the Spanish culture, and in particular, I love the story of Atletico.
Tonight, we lost the final, but I want to celebrate with the guys, and with Cholo, because okay, we lost, but I'm proud to be Atleti!
Nunca Dejes De Creer, between us, and Cardiff there are only 12 matches to go!


Matteo, you did a very nice job here! I just made a few corrections with the first person singular "I" which must always be capitalized no matter where it appears in a sentence. Also, in English, when writing in context like this, numbers one to nine need to be written out. Other than these corrections, I think you did well! If you have any questions, please let me know. If you would like help to practice and improve your English, I'd be happy to help you!

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