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What I just Thought I've been thinking that I should write an entry about anything. But it wasn't easy to find a subject to write about. Anything about me? Korea? or Food? Nothing seemed to be easy and Nothing came up with my mind. Then I thought again, "Well I thought of myself as a person with a lot of thought. But now that I see I don't even have a subject to write about or I know well of." That kind off depressed me. And also thought "I might be a much boring person than I think I am." In these days, I worry that I'm quite lack of knowledge of vary things and deep thought. Since the Internet became prevalent and there are many ways to get information, I guess people(or just me) are spending less time on reading, and it allows people have less time for thinking. I feel like I should read a lot more to be a better and interesting person.

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What's On My Mind Lately

I've been thinking that I should write an entry about something, but it hasn't been easy to find a subject to write about. Something about myself? Korea? or Food? Nothing seemed to be easy and nothing I came up with seemed good. Then I thought again about how I tend to think of myself as a person who thinks quite a bit, but for some reason I can't think of a subject to write about or one that I know vry well.  I know well of."

That kind off depressed me. I also thought  that I might be a more boring person than I thought. 
These days, I worried that I'm not very intellectual. Since the Internet became popular there are many ways to get information, and I guess people (or just me) are spending less time on reading and less time for thinking. I feel like I should read a lot more to be a better and more interesting person.

Well, the internet is a very conveneint place to start learning about anything you want.
Choose something and read everything you can find out about it.  Then, the next week,
choose something else.  This is a great way to become a person who knows more
about more things.   Then link up to groups of people with that or similar interests.
Develop a perspective on it and finally an opionion based on all you've learned.

Or you can just watch movies which is  a lot of fun too.  ^^

그건대문자로써야주세요.   
단어의순서, 단어의선택이나철자를고쳤습니다.             
이건더자연스러운이나더일반적인방법을표현합니다.   
맞은구두점과띄어쓰기을사용해주세요.   
제코멘트나 제안입니다.     
낸시4366으로색은열쇠가만들었입니다. 도움이됐으면좋겠습니다.  
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What I just Thought

I've been thinking that I should write an entry about anything. But it wasn't easy to find a subject to write about. Anything about me? Korea? or Food? Nothing seemed to be an easy topic and nothing came up with to my mind. Then I thought again, "Well I think of myself as a person with a lot of thoughts. But now that I see that I don't even have a subject to write about or one that I know well of." That kind off depressed me. And I also thought "I might be a much more boring person than I think I am." In these days, I worry that I'm quite lacking in of knowledge of various things and deep thought. Since the Internet became prevalent and there are many ways to get information, I guess people (or just me) are spending less time on reading, and it allows people to have less time for thinking. I feel like I should read a lot more to be a better and more interesting person.

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Hi! Great entry, most of my corrections are just to make your writing sound more native. 
Everybody has trouble thinking of what to write sometimes, so please don't think that you're on your own! I'm sure you'll think of some topics, soon. If not, writing about some traditional Korean culture would be interesting for many people, I think.

Good luck with your entries and your English learning! :)
 

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