Life-long friendship exists only in books and films. Or not? (essay)
Life-long friendship. Everyone who has it even once will never forget it. This is a simple true with which we meet in films and books. Believe it or not everyone decides by himself. In my view, life-long friendship is real. To start with, let’s think what do people understand by this concept. Some guess that it means everyday meetings, joint parties, staggering in the shopping malls on the weekends. Of course, I agree, but it isn’t the most important. There are many unexpected events, plenty of things which can happen to you during your life. Even if you haven’t seen each other a whole year you always have the themes of communication and things to do. This is an indicator of true friendship. Secondly, if this kind of relations didn’t exist, people would feel all alone all the time. Moreover, in what way will we explain a human support, a readiness for help others in different situations, sacrifices to people who aren’t your relatives. On the other hand, opponents of this view say that beautiful film stories hardly have a connection with reality. I can particularly agree. In the real life friendship hasn’t this fabulous form. On the my experience, a quarreling and a swearing are often taking place. And it is normal because we all are different and this is perfect. To conclude, I would like to say that, in my opinion, a friendship is more valuable than a love. It is eternal. It is selfless. It doesn’t require an output. I hope that everyone on the Earth will have a life-long friendship.
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Life-long friendship exists only in books and films. Or not? (essay)
Life-long friendship. Everyone who has had it [or "who has experienced it"] even once will never forget it. This is a simple true truth with which we meet see in films and books. Believe it or not, everyone decides by for himself [or "for themself/themselves" to avoid using a gender, this is complicated and English speakers still don't agree how to phrase it without sounding weird] . In my view, life-long friendship is real. To start with, let’s think what do people understand by this concept [better "what people think about this concept" or "what this concept means to people"]. Some guess that it means everyday meetings, joint parties, staggering in the shopping malls on the weekends. Of course, I agree, but it this isn’t the most important. There are many unexpected events, plenty of things which can happen to you during your life. Even if you haven’t seen each other for a whole year you always have the [themes of communication] (I don't know what you mean by this - is it "темы сообщений" or something? If so, "conversation topics" would make sense.) and things to do. This is an indicator of true friendship. Secondly, if this these kinds of relations didn’t exist, people would feel all alone all the time. Moreover, in what way will could we explain a human support, a readiness for helping others in different situations, sacrifices to for people who aren’t your relatives. (Side note - "sacrifice to --" means, for example, "to kill an animal for a god/goddess," like in an Ancient Greek myth) ) On the other hand, opponents of this view say that beautiful film stories hardly have a connection with reality. [or "have hardly any connection with reality."] I can particularly agree. (Do you mean "я очень/в особенности/весьма согласна"? If so, you could say "I definitely agree" or "I completely agree") In the real life friendship doesn't have hasn’t this fabulous form. On the In my experience, a quarreling and a swearing are often takeing place. And it is normal because we all are different and this is perfect. To conclude, I would like to say that, in my opinion, a friendship is more valuable than a love. It is eternal. It is selfless. It doesn’t require an output. I hope that everyone on the Earth will have a life-long friendship.0
You're right Alexandra!
But this kind of friendship is rare and hard to find. Not all people can be loyal and love you just because they love you. In my opinion, I think that even if someone doesn't have a life-long friendship, they should find regular friend who can help them and vise versa, you know easy come, easy go!
And that's how they won't feel lonely..
At last we should admit that "The longest relationship you could have, is the relationship with yourself" :)
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