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Three pie charts give information about water used in residential, industrial and agricultural purposes by three users San Diego County, California and Worldwide. Overall, San Diego and California consume the most water for household, while the whole world uses water mainly on agriculture.
As can be seen from the charts, the percentage of housing water is covered 60% of total water usage in San Diago, one forth of water consumption is consumed on industry and almost one fifth for agriculture. California has its water consumption is devided into three nearly equal parts and human habitation purpose is accounted the most with 38% of total.
The rest of the world uses 70% on planting, outnumbered the two remaining when it doubled a haft industry, not exceeded one tenth of total water consumption in the world is used for residential purpose.
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Can you help me with my essay?
Three pie charts give information about how water is consumed by 3 users in San Diego County, California, and Worldwide. They are separated by the amount they use for residential, industrial and agricultural purposes. San Diego and California consume the most water for residential and agricultural is most consumed Worldwide.As can be seen from the charts, residential water is 60% of total water usage in San Diego, with only one fifth consumption used for agriculture and one fourth used in industry. In California water consumption is almost equally divided.
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Can you help me with my essay?
Three pie charts give information about water used in residential, industrial and agricultural purposes by three users San Diego County, California and Worldwide. Overall, San Diego and California consume the most water for household use, while the rest of the world uses water primarily on agriculture.As can be seen from the charts, the percentage of housing water is covered 60% of total water usage in San Diego, one forth of water consumption is consumed on industry and almost one fifth is used for agriculture. California has its water consumption is divided into three nearly equal parts and human habitation purpose is accounts for 38% of total, making it the largest area of consumption.
The rest of the world uses 70% on planting, outnumbering the two remaining areas by more than halfwhen it doubled a haft industry. Residential consumption does not exceeded one tenth of total water consumption. in the world is used for residential purpose.
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Thank you Susanne, I didn't know that San Diego County is located in California. California chart and San Diego chart is separate so I will think how to describe it
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This is a little confusing to me because San Diego County is in the state of California. Does the California chart include San Diego? You may want to make that clearer.
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