IELTS WRITING TASK 2/PRACTICE 1-2
Still this topic: In many countries, children spend long hours on homework. Some people think less homework can reduce their stress and help develop other skills. What is your opinion?
I just need you to correct this paragraph I've written:
However, too less homework may also leave children plenty of time to play computer games and watch TV. A lack of practicing, such as reading books and doing drills, can make it difficult for children to improve literacy skills and numeracy skills. As a result of it, children will have poor grades, and their career prospects will not be as good as they expect.
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IELTS WRITING TASK 2/PRACTICE 1-2
Still this topic: In many countries, children spend long hours on homework. Some people think less homework can reduce their stress and help develop other skills. What is your opinion?I just need you to correct this paragraph I've written:
However, less homework may also leave children plenty of time to play computer games and watch TV. A lack of practicing, such as reading books and doing drills, can make it difficult for children to improve literacy skills and numeracy skills. As a result of this, children will have poor grades, and their career prospects will not be as good as they expected.
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