My friends Dulce (I am studying the adjectives )
I am going to describe to my dog: Dulce (I will try to use a lot adjectives)
Dulce is 9 months old. She is black and yellow and she likes to running in the park and play with other dogs.Dulce likes to eat chicken and sometimes they are living. :(
When she was a puppy I thought that she will has a little hair, but now she is a lot furry!! Also she is very friendly and lovely! She always seem happy! For that reason her name is Dulce.
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My friends Dulce (I am studying the adjectives )
I am going to describe to my dog: Dulce (I will try to use a lot adjectives)Dulce is 9 months old. She is black and yellow and she likes to running in the park and play with other dogs.Dulce likes to eat chicken and sometimes they are living alive. :(
When she was a puppy I thought that she will would has have a little bit of hair, but now she is a lot very furry!! Also she is very friendly and lovely! She always seems happy! For that reason her name is Dulce.
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I will be thankful for you corrections. :)
Cute dog!
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My friends Dulce (I am studying the adjectives )
I am going to describe to my dog: Dulce (I will try to use a lot adjectives)Dulce is 9 months old. She is black and yellow and she likes to run* in the park and play with other dogs. Dulce likes to eat chicken and sometimes they are alive. :(
When she was a puppy I thought that she will have little hair, but now she is very furry!! Also she is very friendly and lovely! She always seems happy! For that reason her name is Dulce.
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I will be thankful for your corrections. :)
*she likes to run in the park, or, she likes running in the park.
Very well written! I hope you keep her away from chickens?
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My friends Dulce (I am studying the adjectives )
I am going to describe to my dog: Dulce (I will try to use a lot adjectives)Dulce is 9 months old. She is black and yellow and she likes to running in the park and play with other dogs. Dulce likes to eat chicken and sometimes they are alive living. :(
When she was a puppy I thought that she will has would have a little hair, but now she is a lot very furry!! Also she is very friendly and lovely! She always seems happy! For that reason her name is Dulce.
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I will be thankful for your corrections. :)
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