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事情有有效的日期。 事情有有效的日期。 Things have a valid date. 我有预感她会喜欢我。 I have a hunch she will like me. 她给你留下一封信等你。 She left a letter who waited for you. 有时人的心会动摇。 给她一个机会 吧。 At times one's heart can waver . Let's give her a chance. 过去你很胖,现在你很瘦。 发生什么事了? 你要有信心。 You used to be fat now you're thin. What's going down? Be confident. 不要放弃你自已, 去过你挺好可是现在胖了。 Don't let yourself go. You used to look nice but you got fat

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事情有有效的日期。

事情有有效的日期/有效期。
Things have a valid date.

我有预感她会喜欢我。
I have a hunch she will like me.

她给你留下一封信等你读。
She left a letter who waited for you.

有时人的心会动摇。 ,给她一个/次机会 吧。


At times one's heart can waver . Let's give her a chance.

过去你很胖,现在你很瘦。 发生什么事了? 你要(对自己)有信心。
You used to be fat now you're thin. What's going down? Be confident.

不要放弃你自已, 去过过去你挺好可是现在胖了。
Don't let yourself go. You used to look nice but you got fat

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事情有有效的日期。 

Things have a valid date.

我有预感她会喜欢我。
I have a hunch she will like me.

她给你留下一封信等你。
She left a letter who waited for you.

有时(or有时候)人的心会动摇。 给她一个机会 吧。
At times one's heart can waver . Let's give her a chance.

过去你很胖,现在你很瘦。 发生什么事了? 你要有信心。

(another wording:你过去很胖现在很瘦,怎么回事?要有信心。)
You used to be fat now you're thin. What's going down? Be confident.

不要放弃你自已, 去过过去你挺好看可是现在胖了。
Don't let yourself go. You used to look nice but you got fat

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事情有有效的日期。

事情有有效的日期。
Things have a valid date.

我有预感她会喜欢我。
I have a hunch she will like me.

她给你留下一封信等你。<--This means she left a letter, waiting for you.  那个等你的女人(孩)给你留下一封信。
She left a letter who waited for you.

有时人的心会动摇。 给她一个机会 吧。
At times one's heart can waver . Let's give her a chance.

过去你很胖,可现在你很瘦。 发生什么事了? 你要有信心。
You used to be fat now you're thin. What's going down? Be confident.

不要放弃你自已, 你以前看起来很好可是现在胖了。
Don't let yourself go. You used to look nice but you got fat
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事情有有效期。


我有预感她会喜欢我。


她给你留下一封信。


有时候人的心会动摇, 给他一个机会吧。


以前你很胖,现在变得很瘦, 到底发生什么事了? 你要有信心!


不要自暴自弃,以前你很好看可是现在变胖了。

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