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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hello! I have arrived here with the hope that I will improve my english and make new friends in the process. I am learning english because it's the universal language now as the latin was back to the Roman Empire era. And that means that if you learn english you'll have access to an almost infinite knowledge and you'll be able to chat with almost everybody, so it's very exciting. My interests include languages, books, anime, indie music, movies and mind reading. I don't drink either smoke or take drugs but I'm not a vegan :P. So... that's it. I can teach you spanish too, if you want to.

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The first correct was okay. You can also write it this way:

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

"Hello! I came here hoping to improve my English and make new friends in the process. I am learning English because it is the universal language today as that to latin way back the age of the Roman Empire. Which means that if you learn English at present, you will have access to an almost infinite knowledge and be able to chat with almost everybody, so it is very exciting.

My interests includes; languages, books, anime, indie music, movies, and mind reading. I don't drink alcohol, smoke, or take illegal drugs and I am not a vegan either. So that's it. I can teach you Spanish in return if you want."
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello! I have arrived here with the hope that I will improve my english and make new friends in the process. I am learning english because it's the universal language now as the latin was back to during the Roman Empire era. And that means that if you learn english you'll have access to an almost infinite amount of knowledge and you'll be able to chat with almost everybody anyone, so it's very exciting. My interests include languages, books, anime, indie music, movies and mind reading. I don't drink either ,smoke or take drugs but I'm not a vegan :P. So... that's it. I can teach you spanish too, if you want to.
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I mean: The first "correction" was okay and you can write it this way.
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Your English is very impressive. You write like a native speaker!

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