Colours of spring
A mud on the bottom of our shoes and a rising temperature are irrefutable proofs that spring has already commenced. One can hear some birds outdoors and a fragrance of blooming trees spreads itself in fresh air. A grass has all shades of green colour and it seems that it is a large soft carpet. The white blooming trees are looking as brides. A violet lilac attracts bees and yellow dandelions shines as little suns in the grass. The nature is fresh and beautiful. I like it a lot.
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Colours of Spring
A Mud on the bottom soles of our shoes and a the rising temperature are irrefutable proofs that spring has already commenced. One can hear some birds singing outdoors and a fragrance of blooming trees diffusing spreads itself into the fresh air. A Green grasses has of all shades of green colour and it seems that it is look like a soft large soft carpet;The white blooming trees are blooming in bridal white; looking as brides. A violet lilacs attracting bees and yellow dandelions shining like as little little suns - popping out among in the grass. The nature is fresh and beautiful. I like it a lot.Very nice description and hope this correction helps you to express more elegantly the poetic thought in you :)
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Colours of spring
A The mud on the bottom of our shoes and a rising temperature are irrefutable proofs that spring has already commenced. One can hear some birds outdoors and a fragrance of blooming trees spreads itself in fresh air. A The grass is a multitude of green shades and is like e of has all shades of green colour and it seems that it is a large soft carpet. The white blooming trees are looking as brides. A violet lilac attracts bees and yellow dandelions shines as little suns in the grass. The nature is fresh and beautiful. I like it a lot.Just some minor corrections, very poetic.
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