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Correct me please The wedding day. Form the early morning the bride with one of hrr sisters go to the beaty salon whish they had already booked an appointment in. Weanwhile the bride's family get ready and prepare Arabic coffy to welcome the groom's family. On the other hand all the groom's family members and close friends gether in the groom's family house. Then they leave together to the bride's family house forming what we call Alfardeh and usually they beep (car beep) along the way. Once they arrive the bride's family house they are welcomed and offerd Arabic coffey. The sing some traditional songs and then the bride's grandfather, father, or ancle accompany her to a decorated car where she and the groom sit in the back seat while someone, usually a groom's brother or cousin drives them or the groom drives and the bride sit next to him.

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The wedding day. Form the From early in the morning the bride with one of hrr her sisters go to the beaty beauty salon whish which they had already booked an appointment in for. Weanwhile Meanwhile the bride's family get ready and prepare Arabic coffy coffee to welcome the groom's family. On the other hand all the groom's family members and close friends gether gather in the groom's family's house. Then they leave together to go to the bride's family house forming what we call Alfardeh and usually they beep (car beep) along the way. Once they arrive at the bride's family house they are welcomed and offerd offered Arabic coffey coffee. They sing some traditional songs and then the bride's grandfather, father, or ancle uncle accompany her to a decorated car where she and the groom sit in the back seat while someone, usually a groom's brother or cousin drives them or the groom drives and the bride sit next to him.


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Correct me please

The wedding day. From the early morning the bride with one of her sisters goes to the beauty salon which they had already booked an appointment in. Weanwhile the bride's family get ready and prepare Arabic coffee to welcome the groom's family. On the other hand all the groom's family members and close friends gether in the groom's family house. Then they leave together to the bride's family house forming what we call Alfardeh and usually they beep (car beep) along the way. Once they arrive the bride's family house, they are welcomed and offered Arabic coffee. They sing some traditional songs and then the bride's grandfather, father, or ancle accompany her to a decorated car where she and the groom sit in the back seat while someone, usually a groom's brother or cousin drives them or the groom drives and the bride sits next to him.
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During the early morning of the wedding day, the bride and one of their sisters go to the beauty salon they previously booked an appointment in. Meanwhile the bride's family get ready and prepare Arabic coffee to welcome the grooms family, while this is happening the grooms family are all gathering their family members and close friends at the grooms household. They start to leave to go meet the brides family at the brides house while forming what we call Alfardeh and usually they beep their car during the car ride. They are welcomed and offered Arabic coffee when they arrive to the brides family house, they all sing some traditional songs then the brides grandfather, father or uncle accompanies her to a decorated car. The bride and groom sit in the backseat while someone, for example, the grooms brother or cousin drives them or the groom drives himself while the bride sits next to him.

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