【She Is My Friend】would u like to help me to correct it?the grammer misktakes and make it longer
She has a long hair and wears a pair of glasses and she has small eyes. We all called her"small eyes girl". She likes wearing the dress very much and almost wearing the dress, and she also likes wearing Jeams.
She is good at learning and hard-working, so she always gets good grades and she has her own learning methods. In a word, she focuses on the study all the time. She doesn't like doing other stuff to waste her time.
In addition, she is kindness, because she helps others without any rewards. She can try her best to help persons. She is a thoughtful girl.
I want to stay with her for a long time, because she can help me to solve my problems and give me some advise, it helps me a lot. I like her.
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【She Is My Friend】would u like to help me to correct it?the grammer misktakes and make it longer
She has a long hair and wears a pair of glasses and she has small eyes. We all called her"small eyes girl". She likes wearing the dress very much and almost wearing the dress, and she also likes wearing Jeams.She is good at learning and hard-working, so she always gets good grades and she has her own learning methods. In a word, she focuses on the study all the time. She doesn't like doing other stuff to waste her time.
In addition, she is kindness, because she helps others without any rewards. She can try her best to help persons. She is a thoughtful girl.
I want to stay with her for a long time, because she can help me to solve my problems and give me some advise, it helps me a lot. I like her.
She has long hair, wears glasses and has small eyes. As such, we like to call her "small eyes girl". She love wearing dresses and almost always turn up in dresses even though she also like wearing jeans at times. She has her own study methods and is clever and hardworking. As such, she always seems to get good grades. She doesn't like to waste time doing other things and only focuses on studying all the time. She is a kind and thoughtful person who always does her best to help other other people without expecting reciprocation. I would like to be with her for a long time because she solves my problems and gives me advise which helps me alot. I really like her.
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