My Italian trip.
When I after visiting Buenos Aires tried to answer on question "How it was?" it was difficult. The reason is because I was satisfied and disappointed in the same time. And I called that story "The city of controversial feelings".
Last week I come back from Italy. And now I know that I never was so confused about my feelings like now. Lots of sun, brilliant food, people are polite, streets are clean... But I never saw so shabby buildings! Even in really touristic places! Nobody cares about building's looks. Also I was surprised about size of coffee. I heard a lot that Italian coffee "the best!". My expectations were exciting. I'm a coffee addicted. So I used to normal size of cup or mug! In Ireland and most of other countries you can choose the size yourself! However in Italy it's only really small cup of cappuccino! I don't talk about expresso, I know it must be small.
Further, you can get from one city to other by train. It's very easy. One problem, you should buy tickets more than one month for good prise. Otherwise it's a rip off! And you shouldn't surprise if the train will late for 3, 5 or 10 minutes. Mostly it's not necessary to be in time.
As well I was exciting about Roma! It's unreal when you walk through the city and on the one side you see modern buildings but on the other ruins!
I don't have overall meaning about Italy. However I sure I want to repeat my trip!
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My Italian trip.
When I After visiting Buenos Aires, I tried to answer the question, "How difficult it was?" it was difficult. The reason is because I was satisfied and disappointed at the same time. I call this story "The city of controversial feelings".Last week I came back from Italy. And now I know that I never was so confused about my feelings until now. Lots of sun, brilliant food, people are polite, streets are clean... But I never saw such shabby buildings! Even in really touristy places! Nobody cares about the look of the buildings. Also, I was surprised the about size of coffee. I have frequently heard that Italian coffee is "the best!". My expectations were exciting I had really high expectations. I'm a coffee addict, so I am used to normal size of cup or mug! In Ireland and most of other countries you can choose the size yourself! However, in Italy there are really only small cups of cappuccino! I don't know about the expresso; I guess it must be small too.
Furthermore, you can get from one city to other by train. It's very easy. (Instead of saying one problem, I would recommend saying , "One piece of advice is" you should buy tickets more than once a month for a better price. Otherwise, it's a rip off! And you shouldn't be surprised if the train is late for 3, 5 or even 10 minutes. Mostly it's not necessary to be on time.
Also, I was very excited about Roma! It's unreal when you walk through the city and on the one side you see modern buildings, but on the other ruins!
I don't have a (full view or understanding of) overall meaning about Italy. However, I'm sure I want to repeat my trip!
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My Italian trip.
When I after visiting Buenos Aires I tried to answer on the question "How it was it?" it was difficult. The reason is because/that I was satisfied and disappointed in the same time. And I called that story "The city of controversial feelings".Last week I coame back from Italy. And now I know that I never was so confused about my feelings like now. Lots of sun, brilliant food, people are polite, streets are clean... But I never saw so such shabby buildings! Even in really touristic places! Nobody cares about buildings' looks. Also I was surprised about the size of coffee. I heard a lot that Italian coffee is "the best!". My expectations were exciting. I'm a coffee addicted (Either "I'm an addict" or "I'm addicted"). So I used to(?) normal size a of cup or a mug! In Ireland and most of other countries you can choose the size yourself! However in Italy it's only a really small cup of cappuccino! I don't talk about expresso, I know it must be small.
Further, you can get from one city to another by train. It's very easy. One problem, you should buy tickets more than one month for a good prise/...one month if you want a good price. Otherwise it's a rip off/it will be a rip off! And you shouldn't be surprised if the train will be late for 3, 5 or 10 minutes late. Mostly it's not necessary to be in time.
As well Also I was exciting about Roma (I think that if you want to use 'as well' here you need to put it at the end of the sentence)! It's unreal when you walk through the city and on the one side you see modern buildings but on the other ruins!
I don't have overall meaning about Italy (Not quite sure what you meant here :)). However I sure(ly) want to repeat my trip!
Pretty good! It's mostly word order that you find difficult I think. I don't understand one thing though... I thought Buenos Aires was in Argentina, not Italy?
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not this not have mistakes and when you talk about the train will late... this is in Buenos Aires,not?
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WOW!your trip was awesome!! i think, i think that have a little mistakes.. i think! i'm going to read again and i tell you
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Don't judge much strictly, please. This is my first experience of writing the text. :D
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