Driving in other country.
I will start my vacations in just eight weeks and I am absolutely excited about it. I will pass the most of the time in the large city of Los Angeles so I will need to rent a car. Although, I am an experienced driver, I am a bit scared about driving in a different country. At least, I am not going to stay in a country such as England or Ireland where they drive on the right. Sometimes I love driving and sometimes not, as I hate traffic jams and people who drive slowly.
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Driving in other country.
I will begin my vacation in just eight weeks and I am very excited about it. I will spend most of the time in the large city of Los Angeles so, I will need to rent a car. Although, I am an experienced driver, I am a bit scared about driving in a different country. At least I am not going to be in a country such as England or Ireland where they drive on the right side of the road. Sometimes I love driving and sometimes not because I hate traffic jams and people who drive slowly.I added, "on the right side of the road" because in this case it would make sense to include that information but the way you wrote it is also correct.
I deleted the comma after "At least" because it wasn't necessary and the comma after "sometimes not" because because you needed to connect the two I ideas you have in your last sentence.
Oh, and I also substituted the word "begin" with "start" because I feel it works better in this case.
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Driving in other country.
I will start my vacations in just eight weeks and I am absolutely really excited about it. I will pass the spend most of the time in the large city of Los Angeles so I will need to rent a car. Although, I am an experienced driver, I am a bit scared about driving in a different country. At least, I am not going to stay be in a country such as England or Ireland where they drive on the right. Sometimes I love driving and sometimes not, as I hate traffic jams and people who drive slowly.WELL DONE!
absolutely with extreme adjectives = I'm absolutely terrified of spiders or I'm absolutely exhausted.
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I forgot to say : Driving in another country....
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