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Driving in other country. I will start my vacations in just eight weeks and I am absolutely excited about it. I will pass the most of the time in the large city of Los Angeles so I will need to rent a car. Although, I am an experienced driver, I am a bit scared about driving in a different country. At least, I am not going to stay in a country such as England or Ireland where they drive on the right. Sometimes I love driving and sometimes not, as I hate traffic jams and people who drive slowly.

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Driving in other country.

I will begin my vacation in just eight weeks and I am very excited about it. I will spend most of the time in the large city of Los Angeles so, I will need to rent a car. Although, I am an experienced driver, I am a bit scared about driving in a different country. At least I am not going to be in a country such as England or Ireland where they drive on the right side of the road. Sometimes I love driving and sometimes not because I hate traffic jams and people who drive slowly.


I added, "on the right side of the road" because in this case it would make sense to include that information but the way you wrote it is also correct.  

I deleted the comma after "At least" because it wasn't necessary and the comma after "sometimes not" because because you needed to connect the two I ideas you have in your last sentence.  


Oh, and I also substituted the word "begin" with "start" because I feel it works better in this case.

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Driving in other country.

I will start my vacations in just eight weeks and I am absolutely really excited about it. I will pass the spend most of the time in the large city of Los Angeles so I will need to rent a car. Although, I am an experienced driver, I am a bit scared about driving in a different country. At least, I am not going to stay  be in a country such as England or Ireland where they drive on the right. Sometimes I love driving and sometimes not, as I hate traffic jams and people who drive slowly.


WELL DONE!


absolutely with extreme adjectives = I'm absolutely terrified of spiders or I'm absolutely exhausted.

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I forgot to say : Driving in another country....

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