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Essay What makes a good schools’ curricula It is a fact universally acknowledge that the world is rapidly changing in the last few decades. The labour market is looking for people that can satisfied new needs in different fields. Therefore, secondary schools should make some variations in their curricula including subjects such as plumbing or computer courses. Few people would dispute that the stress in many people lives has increased, they do not have enough time to deal with work, children, housework and enjoy their free time. Due to this fact, the new generations of workers has delegated in other people to do their housework. However, If they learn how to fix a plug or do some gardening, they could save a lot of money as well as have a relaxing time during the weekends. Another course to be taken into account is one related with computers and programming language. As I have said before, the world is increasingly growing and knowledge about computers is required. That is the reason why schools should be updated and introduce children to the cutting edge technologies that we can experience nowadays. Another point worth mentioning is the responsibility of the schools to teach students how to use social media in a proper way to avoid bullying. To conclude, it is generally agreed that secondary schools’ curricula should make an improvement to prepare children to face future challenges. Because of this need, I personally believe that the most important one is to teach children to do practical things. In this way, students would have expertise in various fields and could be versatile.

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What makes a good schools’ curricula curriculum 


It is a fact universally acknowledge that the world is rapidly changing in the last few decades. The labour market is looking for people that can satisfied  satisyfy  new needs in different fields. Therefore, secondary schools should make some variations in their curricula including subjects such as plumbing or computer courses.

Few people would dispute that the stress in many people's lives has increased, ;[ you may want to use a semicolon here] they do not have enough time to deal with work, children, housework, [or home]  and enjoy their free time. Due to this fact, the new generations of workers has delegated in other people to do their housework. However, If they learn how to fix a plug or do some gardening, they could save a lot of money as well as have a relaxing time during the weekends.

Another course to be taken into account is one related with computers and programming language. As I have said before, the world is increasingly growing and knowledge about computers is required. That is the reason why schools should be updated and introduce children to the cutting edge technologies that we can experience nowadays.today.  Another point worth mentioning is the responsibility of the schools to teach students how to use social media in a proper way to avoid bullying.

To conclude, it is generally agreed that secondary schools’ curricula should make an improvement to prepare children to face future challenges. Because of this need, I personally believe that the most important one is to teach children to do practical things. In this way, students would have expertise in various fields and could be versatile.

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