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Cover Letter correction Hi there ! Could you please check my cover letter ? Thanks in advance for any correnction, help , suggestion . My name is xxxx-xxxxx and am a Bioengineer from Italy. Having graduated almost two years ago, I was in search for a job within my speciality, but to no avail. Eventually, I did start in an internship as a consultant at an IT company where I was responsible of database support and analysis for post office IT systems. However, by the end of this experience, I realized that, although I could adapt to working in IT, my wish and natural inclination was for something in healthcare. With this goal in mind, I moved to Dublin 7 months ago, to improve my English and gain experience in my desired field.In Ireland I had the opportunity to work as Bioengineer at xxxxxx Hospital where my duties were researching and assisting with projects involved by the Medical Physics and Bioengineering department. Some of these projects were to assist surgeons in the development of innovative new therapies. I really would like to keep working as Bioengineer at xxxx to improve my skills in Development of algorithms, signal processing methods, statistical analysis and interpretation of the results. Activities that I could carried out only partially within (during ?) my studies concluded with an experimental thesis in Design and development of microcontroller based wireless ECG system.

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My name is xxxx-xxxxx and I am a Bioengineer from Italy. After graduating almost two years ago I searched for a job within my speciality, but to no avail. Eventually, I did start an internship as a consultant at an IT company where I was responsible for database support and analysis for post office IT systems.


By the end of this experience, I realized that although I could adapt to working in IT, it was my wish and natural inclination to find something in healthcare. With this goal in mind, I moved to Dublin 7 months ago to improve my English and to gain experience in my desired field. In Ireland I had the opportunity to work as Bioengineer at xxxxxx Hospital where my duties were researching and assisting with projects involved with the Medical Physics and Bioengineering department. Some of these projects included assisting surgeons in the development of innovative new therapies.


I really would like to keep working as a Bioengineer at xxxx to improve my skills in the Development of algorithms, signal processing methods, statistical analysis and interpretation of the results.

Activities that I could carried out only partially within (during ?) my studies concluded with an experimental thesis in Design and development of microcontroller based wireless ECG system.  I'm not exactly sure what this sentence means so I don't think I can correct it yet.

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