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Why some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? -Toefl Essay Thrill and Pleasure There is always number of people who attracted in dangerous sports or activities such as skydiving, rock climbing or car race. In my opinion, the reason of dangerous sports attractiveness is because when people feel thrill, that brings sense of alive and pleasure. Sometimes thrilling activities helps to reduce mental stress. To began with the thrilling activities and pleasure. While people playing sports, their hart beat get faster and blood stream increase. Also thrill will brings fast heat beats as well as sports. The physical settlement provide the brain to produce a chemical, call adrenaline. Adrenaline is the main factor of people to feel excitement and pleasure and the reason for attractiveness or addictiveness of dangerous sports. My own experience is a good example of this. I go to snowboarding since I was ten years old. In that time, snowboardings are most thrilling and exciting activity since sometime I lost control. That thrill made me sweat and beating heart but at same time I feel some sort of pleasure. Almost every person has those experience because it is the natural function of our body. Therefore people are attracted to dangerous sports. Secondly, dangerous activities helps get rid of persons stress and worry. Many dangerous activities requires large settings such as mountains or ocean. The unusual setting helps to forget about stress and worries of daily life and flesh air will make your feeling better. Back to my experience of snowboarding, while i focusing on the dangerous situation, there was no time to think about my problems. And the icy air of winter mountain cleaned my mind. That help me to rethink about all conflicts in school and home works much calmly. The unusual situation helps people to change their perspective and reduce stress when they are focusing on dangerous activity. In conclusion, people are attracted by dangerous sports and activities because it produce excitement and reduce stress by putting themselves into unusual situation. P. S. Long time no post on Italki... I feel kinda nervous by posting this but hope someone very nice fix the errors><

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Secondly, dangerous activities helps get rid of a persons stress and worries. Many dangerous activities requires large settings such as mountains or the ocean. The unusual setting helps one to forget about the stress and worries of daily life and fresh air will make your feeling better. Back to my experience of snowboarding; while i was focusing on the dangerous situation, there was no time to think about my problems. And the icy winter air of the mountain cleared my mind. That helped me to rethink about all my conflicts in school and with homework much more calmly. The unusual situation helps people to change their perspective and reduce stress when they are focusing on a dangerous activity.


In conclusion, people are attracted by dangerous sports and activities because it produces excitement and reduces stress to putting themselves into unusual an situation.

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Why are some people attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? -Toefl Essay

Thrill and Pleasure

There is always a number of people who are attracted to dangerous sports or activities such as skydiving, rock climbing or car racing. In my opinion, the reason of dangerous sports are attractive is because when people feel thrill, that brings a sense of aliveness and pleasure. Sometimes thrilling activities helps to reduce mental stress.

I'll begin with the thrilling activities and pleasure. While people are playing sports, their heartbeat becomes faster and blood flow increases. Thrill also brings a faster heartbeat, just like sports. The physical stimulation(?) causes the brain to produce a chemical called adrenaline. Adrenaline is the main factor in making people to feel excitement and pleasure, and is the reason for the attractiveness or addictiveness of dangerous sports. My own experience is a good example of this. I have been going snowboarding since I was ten years old. In this time, snowboarding has been a most thrilling and exciting activity, since I sometimes lose control. That thrill makes me sweat and makes my heart beat faster, but at same time I feel some sort of pleasure.
Almost every person has that experience because it is the natural function of our body. That's why people are attracted to dangerous sports.

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