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comparison (if you want a noun) and contrast paragraph
Many people think twins are similar in many character traits/features/aspects like face and moral behavior/character but we pay attention to it is not truth (Don't know what you mean here exactly but it's grammatically incorrect).
I have a twin uncles, they have similar their faces, together especially when they were children. Now, if you see them for the first time, you may think that they don't have any differences but if you look accuracy closely, you can find differences in their faces. Also, they are different in moral character/behavior. Ben is very calm and he always tries to solve his problems with by/through speaking, although Shun is rash and hot-tempered. He always begin and quarrel to people do his order (Not sure what you mean exactly but you can say "He always bullies people / manipulates people into doing his bidding / orders people around". They are also different in their favorite food and games. In spite of are being twins, only simile human is their different together. (I have no idea what you mean here, sorry. Could you write it another way?)
Compare and Contrast Paragraph:
Many people think twins are similar in many character ways like looks and morals but we shouldn't pay attention to it, it's not the truth. I have uncles who are twins , they have similar faces, you could especially tell when they were children. Now, if you see them for the first time , you'd think that they don't have any differences but if you look closely , you can find differences in their looks, also they are different morally. Ben is very calm and he always tries to solve his problems by speaking while Shun is rash and hot tempered. He always quarrels and bosses people around . They also are different in their favorite foods and games. In spite of being twins, their only similarity are their differences. Please correct my mistakes in this paragraph.Want to progress faster?
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