IELTS EXAM. TASK 2
Hi everyone! I'm still studying these f*?!'-# exam and I need help with my writings. Thanks to those who had ckecked my previous writings.
Thisone is about academics subjects.
IS THERE ANY VALUE IN STUDYING ACADEMIC SUBJECTS THAT ARE NOT 'USEFUL' IN TERMS OF GENERATING WEALTH FOR THE COUNTRY?
As everyone know, when students begin their ways in University, sometimes can be difficult and stressful to choose the correct career. In fact, this election can be related to parents opinions or even more important, if exists jobs opportunities for thisone. The next essay will discuss the importance of studying anything that you wish without looking for their profesional openings.
Firstly, there are many academic subjects that can be useful in terms of contributing to people's quality of life . One of them, for instance, is studying something in relation with Education. Many professionals claim that this field in particular is not well paid. Teachers spend extra-houres in school and at home working for their students. However, from my experience working as teacher and see how pregressively students are improving, makes your self-steem bigger.
In addition, 'curiosity' it is a significant human trait. With this in mind, there are some academic subjects which allow people to satisfy this need. Astronomy is one of them, it permits people to understand the behave of planets and stars. On the other hand, Archaeology show us how people lived in the past and some artifacts that they used to live.
In short, there is little evendence that simply educating people to be effective workers, make them happier or richer. Therefore, we do not must discredit any academic subject, because all of them have differents and interesting functions.
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IELTS EXAM. TASK 2
Hi everyone! I'm still studying these f*?!'-# exam and I need help with my writings. Thanks to those who had checked my previous writings.This one is about academics subjects.
IS THERE ANY VALUE IN STUDYING ACADEMIC SUBJECTS THAT ARE NOT 'USEFUL' IN TERMS OF GENERATING WEALTH FOR THE COUNTRY?
As everyone knows, when students begin make their ways in University, sometimes it can be difficult and stressful to choose the correct faculty career. In fact, this election can be related to parents' opinions or even more important, if exists there are job opportunities for thisone. The next essay will discuss the importance of studying anything that you wish without looking for their professional openings.
Firstly, there are many academic subjects that can be useful in terms of contributing to a person's people's quality of life . One of them, for instance, is studying something in relation to with Education. Many professionals claim that this field in particular is not well paid. Teachers spend extra hours in school and at home working for their students. However, from my experience working as teacher and seeing how pregressively quickly students are improving, makes your self esteem grow bigger. (might be better to say "increases your self esteem)
In addition, 'curiosity' it is a significant human trait. With this in mind, there are some academic subjects which allow people to satisfy this need. Astronomy is one of them, it permits people to understand the behavior of planets and stars. On the other hand, Archaeology shows us how people lived in the past and some artifacts that they used to live.
In short, there is little evidence that simply educating people to be effective workers, makes them happier or richer. Therefore, we do not must not discredit any academic subject, because all of them have differents and interesting functions.
Good effort Sara. There are a few errors but overall your English is very good!
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