Wim's Diary 22th ,Feb
It was a good day and I watched a movie at night with the nine of my famlily. It seems it's a custom in my family that we go to the cinema watch a movie at the end of the Chinese New year. But today's movie is not that good because I felt sick to some plots.All in all, the atmosphere that we all stayed together made my day!
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Wim's Diary 22nd th ,Feb
It was a good day and I watched a movie at tonight with the nine of my famlily members. It seems it's a custom in my family that we go to the cinema to watch a movie at the end of the Chinese New year. But today's movie is was not that good because some of the scenes made me feel I felt sick to some plots.All in all, the atmosphere with us that we all stayed together made my day!
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Hi Wim. If you have any questions about my corrections, let me know. - Jason
Wim's Diary 22h, February
It was a good day and I watched a movie at night with the nine members of my family. It seems it's a custom in my family that we go to the cinema to watch a movie at the end of the Chinese New year. But today's movie was not that good because I felt sick by some of the parts. All in all, the atmosphere that we all enjoyed/had together made my day!Want to progress faster?
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