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my essay: Is better to earn a lot of money or to enjoy your job? Nowadays people´s target is earn a lot of money due to have a good life. However, sometimes we do not realise that there are other important things appart from the money and it can be a big problem. First of all, currently people usually work too much time, frecuently parents do not have time enough to spend once in a while with their children or just to do things they like. Is it worth eraning more money but not enjoying this kinds of moments which propably they could not do in the future? Secondly, Since we are in the school teachers tell us that we must be doctors or eingeniers, and little by little we forget the real dreams we had when we were younger. Is it not better look for your dreams and earn less money while you do something that you like? From my point of view, the most of us are in jobs we do not like earning money tha sometimes we can not spend because we dont have time enough. So, follow your dreams but earn less money could be an opttion.

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Antonio, good essay. These are some corrections from my understanding of the text. If you have questions, let me know. - Jason

my essay: Is it better to earn a lot of money or to enjoy your job?

Nowadays people´s target is to earn a lot of money due in order to have a good life. However, sometimes we do not realise that there are other important things apart from the money and it can be a big problem.

First of all, currently people usually work too much time. Frequently parents do not have enough time to spend once in a while with their children once in a while, or just to do things they like. Is it worth earning more money but not enjoying these kinds of moments which propably they probably could not do in the future? Secondly, since we were in the school, teachers told us that we must be doctors or engineers, and little by little we forget the real dreams we had when we were younger. Is it not better to follow for your dreams and earn less money while you do something that you like?

From my point of view, the most of us are in jobs we do not like and earning money that sometimes we can not spend because we dont have enough time enough. So, follow your dreams, regardless that earning less money could be an option.

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