Writing challenge. Day 1. List 5 things that make you really happy.
1. First thing that make me happy is food of course! Because I'm in love in food. And I'm not prefer only one cuisine. I like Italian cuisine, china, french and russian of course.
2. Second thing it's books. I'm reading a lot. And everyday I something read. Not only on russian language. I have been read some books in english and soon I want start to read books in german.
3. Third thing it's a music. I'm musician and music is not just one of subject to learn for me. It's my passion and love. I always listen to music.
4. Photography. I'm taking a photocards from my film camera. It's not like digital camera. Because I think a film photos looks more atmospheric.
5. Nature. My inspiration always will be in nature. I think everybody in this world feel this power of nature. And this power give me inspiration.
Well it's only five things that make me happy. I will write about 10 things in the future I guess.
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Writing challenge. Day 1. List 5 things that make you really happy.
1. The first thing that makes me happy is food of course! Because I'm in love in with food. And I'm not don't prefer only one type of cuisine. I like Italian cuisine, china Chinese, French and of course Russian of course.2. The second thing it's is books. I'm reading a lot. And everyday I something read read something. Not only on in the Russian language. I have been reading some books in English, and soon I want to start to read books in German.
3. The third thing it's a is music. I'm musician and music is not just one of a subject to learn for me, it's my passion and love. I always listen to music.
4. Photography. I'm taking a photocards from my film camera. It's not like a digital camera. Because I think a film photos looks more atmospheric.
5. Nature. My inspiration always will be in nature. I think everybody in this world feels this the power of nature. And this power gives me inspiration.
Well it's only five things that make me happy. I will write about 10 things in the future I guess.
*I'm not sure what "photocards" is, it is not an English word. I could not correct that sentence because it doesn't make any sense to me.
Overall, not too bad. You had some minor grammar mistakes but I could easily understand what you were saying for each point.
Hope this helps, good luck with your English.
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Yellow is where I made corrections and the slashes are some things I took out.
Where is is blue is a section that I didn't understand enough to edit.
Writing challenge. Day 1. List 5 things that make you really happy.
2. The second thing is it's books. I'm I reading a lot, and everyday I read something something read. I do not only in the Russian language as I have been read some books in English and soon I want start to read books in German.
3. The third thing is it's a music. I'm a musician and music is not just a one of subject to learn for me. It's my passion and love. as I always listen to music.
4.The fourth thing is photography. I'm taking a photocards from my film camera. It's not like digital camera, because I think a film photos looks more atmospheric.
5. The fifth thing is nature. My inspiration always come from will be in nature. I think everybody in this world feels this power of nature. Aand this power gives me inspiration.
Well it's there are only five things that make me happy, I will write about 10 things in the future, I guess.
You did fairly well though in some cases I think you confuse it's meaning. It means 'it is' in a shorter form, instead of "it is" we put "it's" removing the other "i". When you said it's a music, you were saying "it is a music" which would sound right, the a isn't necessary. Music is not "a thing" it's a broad subject.
I hope that helps.
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