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Should public education be free? Sara Goldrick-Rab, the author, argues that every American people think that college such as public education should be free and the government is supposed to take care of low-income students. (1)The supports of money is really small, and actually, it doesn’t work well as financial aid. ・There are two groups in federal student aid: Students can get financial aid to graduate at school The middle-class families can get support, but it’s loan. (2)The government cares about senior citizens a lot instead of education problems because of the bad politics and public policy. (3) The universal public higher education acknowledges that college can available for all people as long as they can help their economy and democracy. ・The financial support for students are just beginning, if it can start, the education quality will become better. →Students can learn well instead of working, it means that it doesn't depend on the ability of students, it is equal for all.

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Should public education be free?

Sara Goldrick-Rab, the author, argues that every all American people think that college such as public education should be free and that the government is supposed to take care of low-income students.

(1)The supports monetary support offered by the government is really small, and actually, it doesn’t work well as financial aid.
・There are two groups in types of federal student aid:
Students who can get financial aid to help them graduate at from school
The Middle-class families who can get support, but it’s in the form of a loan.

(2)The government cares about senior citizens a lot, instead of focusing on education problems, because of the bad politics and public policy.

(3) The universal public higher education acknowledges that college can be available for all people, as long as they can help their economy and democracy.
・The financial support for students are just beginning, if it can start, the quality of education will become better. →Students can learn well instead of working, it means that it doesn't depend on the ability of students(I'm not sure if you've expressed this the way you meant to, I think you meant to say that "it doesn't depend on a students financial situation, but upon there individual ability"), it is equal for all.
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Nothing is really free in reality. I think it is better to say subsidized. Subsidized health care, subsidized education etc.

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