Tony仔's notebook entry: Mar 21, 2011
It's been long time since I logged here last time. I spent lots of time on youtube these days and forgot to check out the other SNS. I am sick of youtube now. Everytime I go to youtube I have got to use the VPN which annoys me a lot. But I learned much from that video website and I am wondering why the damned GFW blocked such a good site.
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Tony仔's notebook entry: Mar 21, 2011
It's has been a long time since I logged here the last time. I spent lots much of my time on Youtube these days and forgot to check out the other social networking servicesSNS. I am sick of Youtube now. Everytime Each time, I go to youtube before getting into Youtube, I have got to use the VPN virtual private network which annoys me greatly. a lot. But However, I learnted much from that video website and I am wondering why the damned GFW Great Firewall of China blocked such a good site.
Don't use acronymns or abbreviations. Most people won't understand what you are talking. So don't be lazy. Use those that are well known to everyone such as US, UK. You are writing for a wide audience. Unless the reader is a geek, he or she will not understant you. For example, GFW can also mean Grand Falls, Windsor, a township in Newfoundland, Canada.
If you are not a movie buff, you won't know what is GWTW is.
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Tony, there is really nothing wrong with this entry except the abbreviations. I don't know why Jeff is so picky. It is perfectly acceptable in American English to use "it's" to mean either "it is" or "it has". I do agree with Jeff in that this site has a wide audience so you might try being less technical as not everyone understands how websites work, even though we use them all the time. I am going to use a translator to write this in Chinese in case you don't understand all of it.
Tony，实在没有什么错此项除外缩写。我不知道为什Jeff 是这么挑剔。这是完全可以接受在美式英语中使用“它”的意思是“是”或有。”我不同意，这个网站有一个广泛的观众，所以你可以尝试技术网站是如何工作的，不是每个人都明白，即使我们使用他们所有的时间与杰夫。我要使用一个翻译写在中国的情况下你不明白这一切。
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