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My first day of italki I found the italki and I joined it today. I am learning English for a long time. When I watched so many people login here, I felt I was excited. I meant they gave me a power. Though I have a little time to learn English everyday, I try to keep learning English and the other language and I want to help someone who need help about Japanese.

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My first day of italki

"I found the italki and I joined it today."

-> I found italki and joined it today. 

(Also it would be abit more natural to say: "Today I found italki and joined." )


I am learning English for a long time.

-> I have been learning English for a long time. 


When I watched so many people login here, I felt I was excited.

-> When I watched so many people login here, I felt excited.

(also it would be abit more natural to say saw or seen instead of watched because "watched" seems more suited to a literal/physical act, for example:

"I watched you leave"   


Also instead of saying "login" you could just say "on here"

-> When I saw so many people on here, I felt excited. 


"I meant they gave me a power."

by power I think you mean motivation, which would be more natural to say:

"it gave me the power"

or "it made me feel motivated" 


"Though I have a little time to learn English everyday,"

-> This is good and fine as it is but I think "Although" seems more suited to what you're trying to say here, also adding in "only" would emphasise this:

"Although I only have a little time to learn English everyday"


I try to keep learning English and the other language

-> more than one language = "language's" 


and I want to help someone who need help about Japanese.

• "need" -> "needs"

• "about" -> "with"

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My first day of italki My First Day on Italki

(Uppercase words^^^^)


I found the Italki and I joined it today.

I've been am learning English for a long time.

When I watched found out so many people login go on here, I felt I was excited.

I meant they gave me a power. In this way I felt that they gave me power (motivated me?).

Though Although I have a little bit of time to learn English everyday, I try to keep learning English and the other languages.

and I want to help someone who needs help about learning Japanese.

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My first day of italki

Today i found italki. I have been learning English for a long time. When I watched so many people login here, I felt excited. I mean they gave me a power. Though I have a little time to learn English everyday, I try to keep learning English and the other languages and I want to help someone who needs help with Japanese.

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