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My first day of italki
"I found the italki and I joined it today."-> I found italki and joined it today.
(Also it would be abit more natural to say: "Today I found italki and joined." )
I am learning English for a long time.
-> I have been learning English for a long time.
When I watched so many people login here, I felt I was excited.
-> When I watched so many people login here, I felt excited.
(also it would be abit more natural to say saw or seen instead of watched because "watched" seems more suited to a literal/physical act, for example:
"I watched you leave"
Also instead of saying "login" you could just say "on here"
-> When I saw so many people on here, I felt excited.
"I meant they gave me a power."
by power I think you mean motivation, which would be more natural to say:
"it gave me the power"
or "it made me feel motivated"
"Though I have a little time to learn English everyday,"
-> This is good and fine as it is but I think "Although" seems more suited to what you're trying to say here, also adding in "only" would emphasise this:
"Although I only have a little time to learn English everyday"
I try to keep learning English and the other language
-> more than one language = "language's"
and I want to help someone who need help about Japanese.
• "need" -> "needs"
• "about" -> "with"
My first day of italki My First Day on Italki
(Uppercase words^^^^)
I found the Italki and I joined it today.
I've been am learning English for a long time.
When I watched found out so many people login go on here, I felt I was excited.
I meant they gave me a power. In this way I felt that they gave me power (motivated me?).
Though Although I have a little bit of time to learn English everyday, I try to keep learning English and the other languages.
and I want to help someone who needs help about learning Japanese.
My first day of italki
Today i found italki. I have been learning English for a long time. When I watched so many people login here, I felt excited. I mean they gave me a power. Though I have a little time to learn English everyday, I try to keep learning English and the other languages and I want to help someone who needs help with Japanese.
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