Let It Go
I am a loser again. For a very long time I have been obsessed with a love which I created myself. It is unrequited. There is a misunderstanding between us. He doesn't love me anymore. I screwed up everything. I am a stupid. I have no strength to fight with it. I am just waiting at the centre of everything without doing anything. I am just waiting the storm to ease. I forgot how long I have been there. Weather is changing, days are passing but I am still standing there.
Amy T.
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Let It Go
I am a loser again. For a very long time I have been obsessed with a love which I created myself. It is unrequited. There is a misunderstanding between us. He doesn't love me anymore. I screwed up everything. I am a stupid. I have no strength to fight with it. I am just waiting at the centre of everything without doing anything. I am just waiting for the storm to ease. I forget how long I have been there. The weather is changing, the days are passing, but I am still standing there.
Amy T.
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Let It Go
I am a loser again. For a very long time I have been obsessed with a love which I created myself. It is unrequited. There is a misunderstanding between us. He doesn't love me anymore. I screwed up everything. I am a stupid. I have no strength to fight with it. I am just waiting at the centre(center) of everything without doing anything. I am just waiting (for) the storm to ease. I forgot how long I have been there. Weather is changing, days are passing but I am still standing there.Amy T.
This is very well written with only minor mistakes. Even with the mistakes you meaning was clear and understandable. Keep up the good writing and toward this issues....随它吧!!
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