Your Chinese is very impressive given you've only studied Chinese for two years! There are a few grammatical and typographical errors, nothing really serious. Below I tried to rewrite some of your sentences in a way that sounds more natural to me. 

我很喜欢中文歌

我很喜欢听中文歌。我喜欢听嘻哈音乐。我有一个问题：我只学了两年中文，所以我的水平不好。我常常一首歌反复听。我真的希望有人给我推荐应该听哪些歌手。请你们告诉我我应该听谁的歌，类似王力宏、黄家驹、周杰伦的。谢谢你们。感谢你们的推荐！