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Essay: Not enough is being done to protect endangered animals. Nowadays mankid expand without limits, taking the natural spots where wild animal live. Besides that some old traditions give parts of animals miraculous properties. For these reasons animals as tigers, elephants and rhinos are dissapearing from the word and in the future they will only be seen in pictures and videos. The fur of the tiger, the horn of a rhino and the tusk of elephants are taken as nice collectors objects. Is our duty as humans to protect and preserve the enviroment finding a place for these animals and making them part of our world. The break of the ecosystem repercute in other animals and in the end it will affect us. In my opinion wild animals should be protected in their own animals reserves. Wild reserves have been proved as a way to attract tourism to poor countries. The incomes of the reserves go to the community giving them a reason to protect the animals they killed in the past. _______________________________________________________________________________ Sorry!!, probably lot of mistakes; it just a bored essay. The content is not important, its more the grammar and writting. I really appreciate any correction. ^^

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Essay: Not enough is being done to protect endangered animals.

Nowadays mankind expands without limits, taking the natural spots where wild animal live. Also some old traditions give parts of animals miraculous properties.
For these reasons animals as tigers, elephants and rhinos are disappearing from the world and in future they will only be seen in pictures and videos. The fur of the tiger, the horn of a rhino and the tusk of elephants are taken as nice collectors objects.
Is our duty as humans to protect and preserve the environment finding a place for these animals and making them part of our world. The break of the ecosystem repurcusses on other animals and in the end it will affect us all.
In my opinion wild animals should be protected in their own wildlife reserves. Wild reserves have been proved as a way to attract tourism to poor countries. The incomes of these reserves go to the community giving them a reason to protect the animals they killed in the past.


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Sorry!!, probably lot of mistakes; it is just a boring essay. The content is not important, its more the grammar and writing. I really appreciate any correction. ^^

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