A debate in our class.
Our class, recently,held a heated debate about whether the online shopping should be used widely. Here are the results:
About three fifthes of us are in favor of online shopping. To begin with, as a burgeoning and convient way for shopping, you can buy goods no matter when and where you are. What's more? For the much lower price of the goods sold online, those who is frugal can save money through it. In addition, you are able to buy what is unigue to online shopping by shopping online.
While the rest argue that online shopping has so many disadvantages that we do can't use it frequently.
For one thing, there is few limitations on building an online shop, so the goods, sometimes, can't get quality assurance. For another thing, seeing is believing. Without seeing the real goods, we can not judge whether them suit us or not.
As an old saying goes that every coin has two sides, so we should have a dialectical attitude for it. Lower as the price is, we must be careful when shoping online.
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A debate in our class.
Our class recently held a heated debate about whether online shopping should be used widely. Here are the results:About three fifths of us are in favor of online shopping. One reason is because it is a burgeoning and convenient way of shopping as you can buy goods no matter when and where you are. Another reason is that as goods sold online are cheaper, those who are frugal can save money. In addition, you are able to buy goods that are only sold online. (Is that what you mean?)
The other two fiths find that online shopping has so many disadvantages so that we can't use it frequently. One reason is becaause there are few limitations on building an online shop, so the goods sometimes may not get good quality assurance. Another reason is “seeing is believing”. Without seeing the real goods, we can not judge whether or not they suit us.
There is an old saying that says that every coin has two sides, so we should have a dialectical attitude for it. Lower as the price is, we must be careful when shopping online.
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A debate in our class.
Our class recently held a heated debate about whether online shopping should be used widely. These were the results:About three fifths of the students are in favor of online shopping. (what about the other people?). One of the reasons for being in favor of online shopping is... To begin with, because it is a convenient way for shopping. You can purchase goods no matter when and where you are. What's more? You can obtain goods sold online for a much lower price, which is especially appealing to those who are looking to save some money. In addition, you are able to buy what is unigue to online shopping by shopping online.??? (You can buy things that are not normally sold at a brick-and-mortar store?)
While the rest argue that online shopping has so many disadvantages that we do can't use it frequently. (this sentence should go right at the beginning, after showing the results for 3/5 of the students).
They argue that because there might be fewer barriers to the establishment of an online shop, quality assurance practices are less strict. For another thing, seeing is believing.??? Without seeing the actual products, we can not determine whether they are good or not? (or something like: we cannot really determine whether we will like the product or not)?.
There is an old saying that goes like this: every coin has two sides, so we should have a dialectical attitude for it. Lower as the price is, we must be careful when shopping online.
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