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ON MEETING A NEW FRIEND FROM NEPAL This weekend is finishing here in Spain, nevertheless I have become pretty glad because I have met a new acquaintance on italki. He is from Nepal and after holding an hour conversation7 the two of us, I am quite sure that we will eventually become friends like it have happened whith my great one from Volgograd. The former is a friendly person, polite, kind and helpful and both of us share the same tastes on things as I have been aware during our chat. He told me about tha aftermath of Nepal's earthquakes and how many people have lost their lives and relatives. One of the situation that went me sad by far is the case of a little girl who lost her whole family ( now she has been adopted by her aunt). After having talked with him I realized how many people in the world are suffering without many of us (I am the first) doing anything but just shifting the TV channel. So, I feel myself compel both to pray for them and ask for aid to this beautiful and peaceful country.

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ON MEETING A NEW FRIEND FROM NEPAL

primero, hago solamente cambios necesarios; a continuación, haré cambios para mejorar la fluidez

This weekend is finishing here in Spain, nevertheless I have become pretty glad because I have met a new acquaintance on italki. He is from Nepal and after holding an hour conversation between the two of us, I am quite sure that we will eventually become friends like it have happened with my great one from Volgograd.
The former is a friendly person, polite, kind and helpful and both of us share the same tastes on things as I have been aware during our chat. He told me about the aftermath of Nepal's earthquakes and how many people have either lost their lives or relatives. One of the situations that made me the most sad by far is the case of a little girl who lost her whole family ( now she has been adopted by her aunt).
After having talked with him I realized how many people in the world are suffering without many of us (I am the first) doing anything but just shifting the TV channel.
So, I feel myself compelled both to pray for them and to ask for aid to this beautiful and peaceful country.

 

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the most sad by far no sé si puedes decir sad/sadder/saddest o sad/more sad/the most sad. Es posible los dos son correctos. A veces en ingles hay dos maneras correctas para hacer una comparación.

"by far"  bien usado, pero creo hay que decir "the most sad o the saddest adelante de "by far".

Pero tu entrada se lee facilmente. Buen trabajo.

 

 

This weekend is coming to an end in Spain, nevertheless I am pretty glad because I have met a new acquaintance on italki. He is from Nepal and after holding an hour long conversation with him, I am quite sure that we will eventually become friends just like it have happened with my good friend  from Volgograd.


My new acquaintance from Nepal is a friendly person, polite, kind and helpful and from our chat I believe both of us share the same views on things. He told me about the aftermath of Nepal's earthquakes and how many people have either lost their lives or suffered the loss of relatives. One of the situations that made me the most sad by far is the case of a little girl who lost her whole family ( now she has been adopted by her aunt).
After having talked with him I realized how many people in the world are suffering without many of us (I am the first) doing anything but just changing the TV channel.
So, I feel myself compelled both to pray for them and to ask for aid to this beautiful and peaceful country.

 

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