Internet Love

I corrected an entry in Daniel's diary, in which he is proposing marriage to his Chinese girlfriend who he met on the internet.* I saw how happy they are, and that is the best LOVE.** When people meet and get to know each other on the net, then become friends or language partners, they may become attracted to each other and want to get to know each other more closely. Soon it is no longer just online contact; they become best friends or even lovers. They have gone from the net to realize that they want to give a lifetime commitment to each other. It's*** the perfect life. So the meeting in person is the most important thing, getting to know more about each other's culture, lifestyle, family relations, and becoming fully integrated into each other's lives. If they don't meet, I think it's not true love. So I pray that God will bless Daniel, and best wishes to them.

* You have to remember that your reader has not read my essay, so they would not know who the them in your next sentence refers to. 

** Remember, in English, you NEVER put a space BEFORE a period, comma, colon, semi-colon, question mark, or exclamation point. You almost always put a space AFTER them. 

*** it's means it is. its means 它的。

The Net Love

I had corrected the diary of Daniel, I am seeing happiness from them and what is best is love, when people meet and get to know each other on the net, then they make friends or exchange their languages, and get to know each other and become more attracted to each other. Someone who spends longer time in contact with one another and someone who becomes best friends or a lover, they walk from the net only to realize that he or she has given a lifetime commitment to each other. its a perfect life. So the meetup is the most important thing, to know more about each other's culture, lifestyle, family relations, and become fully integrated into each other's life. If they don't meet, I think that's not true love. So I pray god bless Daniel, and best wishes to them.