First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Oi pessoas!

Eu sou Brie e vivo no USA. Eu è aprender Português por que quero viver na Brasil algum dia. Tenho o amigo e ele sabe Português muito bem. Ele tente ajudar me mas não estudante bom. Pode ajuda me por favor?

Muito Obrigada!

Brie
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Hi Brie. Nice to know that you want to learn Portuguese. As a Brazilian native, I know that writing, reading and listening are fundamental skills that you will need to develop. However, cultural informations may be so important as the others. So, if you would like to practice some conversation and exchange cultural aspects I would be glad and honored. In turn, I would like to receive some help with my English.

In the next lines, I give you some helpful tips about your text. Take care!

Oi* pessoas pessoal / gente!

Eu sou Brie** e vivo nos EUA USA. Eu è gostaria de aprender Português por que quero viver no na Brasil algum dia. Tenho um o amigo que e ele sabe Português muito bem. Ele tenta tente me ajudar me mas eu não sou uma estudante muito boa bom. Pode me ajudar ajuda me por favor?

Muito Obrigada!

Brie
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* An other useful greeting is OLÁ, instead of OI (both are correct).

When you want to make reference to a great amount of persons the words PESSOAL and GENTE are the best. If you have 5 or 6 friends and you would like to talk to all of them, so use GALERA.

EUA - Estados Unidos da América (means United States of America).

gostaria de - It has the same meaning of "would like" a desire, a will.

Brasil is a masculin name. Then, you should use NO, instead of NA.

When you have said "Tenho o amigo", you should specify who is your friend, because the article O is a defined article. If you want to refer one of your friends you should use the undefined article (UM).

QUE in this prhase has the same meaning than WHO. Example: I have knew the man who sold my house.

The complete conjugation of the Simple Present to the verb TENTAR is:

EU TENTO
TU TENTAS
ELE/ELA TENTA
NÓS TENTAMOS
VÓS TENTAIS
ELES/ELAS TENTAM

You have not used anyone of this forms, but an other one, the imperative. If you would like to order something, use the imperative. But in this case the right is TENTA.