First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hi, my name is Young-eun Lee. I have English name, Irene, but I'd like to be called as my real name. I'm an international student in UCSD.
I'm 23 years old and living in San Diego right now. I've been here for aabout 8months to study English. I'm a university student in Korea.
I wanna meet or make friends like a conversational partner via this site.
Bye~
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hi young eun, nice to see u here.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hi, my name is Young-eun Lee. I have an English name, it's Irene, but I prefer to be called by my real name, Young-eun Lee. I'm an international student at UCSD.I'm 23 years old and I'm living in San Diego right now. I came here about 8 months ago to study English. I'm also a university student in Korea.
I want to make a conversation partner via this website.
Bye~
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hahah(: I know him~How did you know that? He is my friend.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hi, my name is Young-eun Lee. I have an English name, it's Irene, but I prefer to be called by my real name, Young-eun Lee. I'm an international student at ____여기에 대학교 이름을 철자해주세요________.I'm 23 years old and I'm living in San Diego right now. I came here
I want to
Bye. << 맞은구두점은사용해주세요.
안녕하세요. 처음 뵙겠습니다. 야! 이건 아주 익숙한 에세이예요! 왜요 알아나요? ㅋㅋ
파란색 = 정정 & 철자 Correction & Spelling
녹색 = 더자연스러운방법 More natural / common & Optional
보라색 = 코멘트 / 제안 Comment - Suggestion
밑줄 = 구두점과 띄어쓰기 Punctuation - Spacing
밑줄 = 구두점과 띄어쓰기 Punctuation - Spacing
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http://www.italki.com/notebook/entry/64644.htm < 당신은 그를 이미 알 지도 몰라요?
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