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On Friday, the 26th of June, at 9:50 A.M, my parents and I began our journey to Prague. We went through Malmo, stopping along the road for lunch and refreshments, and continued the next day through Berlin and then on to Prague. Most of the trip was quite tolerable; the weather was partly cloudy, but for the majority of the day it was rather nice.
Once we arrived in Prague, we started by taking the local bus at Stone Street, and from there it lead us to a shopping center opposite of Tornby, which also included a gas station. I was expecting it to be a lot busier than it was. At first the stop was very empty for quite some time until people started arriving for the 10:30 am bus. The first destination in Ödeshög was near a Burger King, where I enjoyed a hamburger and some fries. The second was at Ljunby, where I bought a bun cake and a cola. We arrived at the Hotel Comfort in Malmo at 18:30. It felt good to at last check in on the first day of our journey. We ate some Chinese food (rice with broccoli), schnitzel, and Coca Cola at Central Station that night.
On Saturday, June 27th, I woke up at around 6:00-6:30 for breakfast. There was plenty to choose from, so I selected yogurt, sandwiches, bacon, and cake; washing it down with some orange juice. Our departure was at about 7:20am. We went over the Öresund bridge (approximately15.9 kilometers long) to Denmark. From there, we took the ferry to southern Gedzer.
At around 11:20am, we went to Rostock by ferry. Inside, there was a buffet where I ate shrimp and fish, drank Cola, and had some delicious cake for dessert. Arriving on the deck around 13:20, my family and I took time to appreciate the warmer, sunnier break in the weather and before we proceeded to our next rest stop. On this cloudy day, we came to the capital of Germany, Berlin, and checked into a fairly large, nice, and quiet hotel. After checking in we went into town, ate gulashsopa for dinner, and bought some Legos and shirts for my nephews. Finally, still in cloudy weather but with happy hearts, we went back to our hotel. On Sunday, June 28th, we woke at about 6:45. At 7:00, I had muesli, yogurt, and bread for breakfast. Later, we took another rest stop near a gas station.
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Excellent writing Pierre. If you have any questions about my corrections, please let me know. - Jason
Please change this into perfect english grammar less repeatings thanks
On Friday, the 26th of June, at 9:50 A.M, my parents and I began our journey to Prague. We went through Malmo, stopping along the road for lunch and refreshments, and continued the next day through Berlin and then on to Prague. Most of the trip was quite tolerable; the weather was partly cloudy, but for the majority of the day it was rather nice.Once we arrived in Prague, we started by taking the local bus at Stone Street, and from there it lead us to a shopping center opposite from Tornby (or simply "opposite Tornby"), which also included a gas station. I was expecting it to be a lot busier than it was. At first the stop was very empty for quite some time until people started arriving for the 10:30 am bus. The first destination in Ödeshög was near a Burger King, where I enjoyed a hamburger and some fries. The second was at Ljunby, where I bought a bun cake and a cola. We arrived at the Hotel Comfort in Malmo at 18:30. It felt good to at last check in on the first day of our journey. We ate some Chinese food (rice with broccoli), schnitzel, and Coca Cola at Central Station that night.
On Saturday, June 27th, I woke up at around 6:00-6:30 for breakfast. There was plenty to choose from, so I selected yogurt, sandwiches, bacon, and cake; washing it down with some orange juice. Our departure was at about 7:20am. We went over the Öresund bridge (approximately15.9 kilometers long) to Denmark. From there, we took the ferry to southern Gedzer.
At around 11:20am, we went to Rostock by ferry. Inside, there was a buffet where I ate shrimp and fish, drank Cola, and had some delicious cake for dessert. Arriving on the deck around 13:20, my family and I took time to appreciate the warmer, sunnier break in the weather and before we proceeded to our next rest stop. On this cloudy day, we came to the capital of Germany, Berlin, and checked into a fairly large, nice, and quiet hotel. After checking in we went into town, ate gulashsopa for dinner, and bought some Legos and shirts for my nephews. Finally, still in cloudy weather but with happy hearts, we went back to our hotel. On Sunday, June 28th, we woke at about 6:45. At 7:00, I had muesli, yogurt, and bread for breakfast. Later, we took another rest stop near a gas station.
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