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첫 번째새벽
해돋이: sunrise
여명: dawn
해맞이: welcoming the sun
새벽: the time of the day around sunrise
떠오르는 태양: the rising sun (literally)
- I altered many sentences in an attempt to sound as authentic as possible besides maybe the lack of agglutination.
- "번째" is used only when you go on counting. "first love" is "첫 사랑", NOT "첫 번째 사랑" for example.
- I tried to avoid using the same word over and over.
- Pay attention to how the sentences got reconstructed in order to omit the subject. This is the way Korean is supposed to be spoken/written in general.
Send me a message if you have further questions.
첫 번째새벽
오늘은 1일 1월 2016년 이에요. 매년마다 저는 첫 번째 해돋이를 봐요. 여러 명소에서 새해 해돋이를 봤었어요. 이년 전에 1일 1월에 / 새해에 저는 플로리다에서 카약을 타고 있었어요. 저는 바닷가에서 자고 있었어요. 저는 카약을 타느라 너무 피곤했지만 해돋이를 즐겁게 봤어요. 작년에는 한국에서 살았어요. 새해 첫 해돋이를 한국에 봤을 때 날씨가 진짜 추웠어요. 해돋이를 봤던 도시에서는 겨울내내 눈이 매일 왔어요. 이번 새해에 저는 제_고향 오스틴 텍사스에서 있어요. 이번 아침에 저는 친구들과 정말 일찍 일어났어요. 우리는 오스틴에서 제일 예쁜 데 / 곳에 갔어요. 안개가 많이 꼈지만 해돋이가 아름다웠어요. 당신은 (당신만의) 새해 아침을 반기는 전통 / 방법이 있나요?
Today is the first of January 2016. Each year I watch the first sunrise of the year. I’ve seen the first sunrise in many interesting places. Two years ago, on the first of January, I was kayaking in Florida. I slept and camped on the beach. I was really tired from kayaking but I enjoyed the sunrise. Last year I saw the first sunrise in Korea when it was really cold. In that city in winter it snowed every day. This New Year’s I’m back in my hometown Austin, Texas. This morning I woke up really early with my friends. We went to the prettiest place in Austin. Even though there was a lot of fog the sunrise was beautiful. Do you have any New Year’s morning traditions?
예전 동해 바다에서 해돋이 봤던 기억이... ^^/~
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