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Preparation for Oshogatsu (beginning of January) (2 of 2) Today is the end of this year. I'm going to eat Ozoni tomorrow. So , I cooked until the preparation today . Because it is hard to cook and serve it in short time . Ozoni is a kind of soup . And the sort of Ozoni is as same as number of families . I think my Ozoni is based on my mother's one , but probably it is not same . So , I'll introduce my Ozoni ! The ingredients is below. ************************ 1)Japanese Daikon radish cut to thick sticks and sliced to thick 2)Carrot cut to 4 sticks and sliced to thick 3)Japanese Satoimo potato peeled and cut to large dice ( I love this sticky potato.) 4)Japanese Komatsuna leaves rinse in water 5)Chicken leg meat cut to cube 6)Rice cake 7)Dashi stock from dried bonito I use instant . 8)Soy sauce for taste ************************ Today's preparation is done until to cut and boil .(1 to 5) At tomorrow's morning , I'll cook the rests of the parts . 1)cut Komatsuna leaves to about 2cm (or 1 inch) length 2)toss all prepared ingredients into a pan and boil 3)Add soy sauce to taste 4)bake a rice cake until golden brown 5)add rice cake into the pan and turn off the heating Done ! You put it into a wood soup bowl (we call "Owan") . So, let's eat ! You can see this , I'll be able to start to eat in just 10 minutes at morning . Would you try cooking Ozoni ?

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Preparation for Oshogatsu (the beginning of January) (2 of 2)

Today is the end of this year.
I'm going to eat Ozoni tomorrow.
So , I cooked until the preparation began preparing it todaybecause it is hard to cook and serve it in a short time .

Ozoni is a kind of soup .
And the type sort of Ozoni depends on your family's recipe. is as same as number of families .
I think my Ozoni is based on my mother's one , but probably it is not the same .

So , I'll introduce my Ozoni !

The ingredients is are below.
************************
1)Japanese Daikon radish
cut into thick sticks and sliced ot thick 


2)Carrot
cut into 4 sticks and sliced to thick

3)Japanese Satoimo potato
peeled and cut to large dice
( I love this sticky potato.)

4)Japanese Komatsuna leaves
rinsed in water

5)Chicken leg meat
cut into cubes

6)Rice cake

7)Dashi stock from dried bonito
I use instant .

8)Soy sauce for to taste
************************
Today I did steps 1-5.
Today's preparation is done until to cut and boil .(1 to 5)
At tomorrow's morning , I'll cook finish the rests of the parts .
1)cut Komatsuna leaves to about 2cm (or 1 inch) length
2)toss all prepared ingredients into a pan and boil
3)Add soy sauce to taste
4)bake a rice cake until golden brown
5)add rice cake into the pan and turn off the heating

Done !
You put it into a wood soup bowl (we call "Owan") .
So, let's eat !

You can see this , I'll be able to start to eat in just 10 minutes at morning .

Would you try cooking Ozoni ?

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Ann's correction is good, but I want to add a little.

Because it is hard to cook and serve it in short time .
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because it's hard to cook and serve quickly. 


You can change "in a short time" to "quickly" to sound more fluent. 


I think my Ozoni is based on my mother's one , but probably it is not the same

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I think my Ozoni is based on my mother's , but it's probably not the same.

 

change "it is" to "it's" to sound more fluent. 

"it" will always go before "probably"

This is a nicely written recipe. Good job!
I can feel your enthusiasm when I read it. I'd be excited to try cooking it.  

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