通过修改作文引发的感想

首先，我很讶异有那么多世界各地的朋友来此学习语言。
Firstlyl, I was surprised that there are so many people from all around the word, who came here to learn languages.
但是，我发现每个人的语言能力不尽相同。
But our language skills  may be different.
所以，有时候我会很困惑，不知道谁说的更准确些。
So, sometimes I'm confused, because I do not know who's answer is more accurate.
特别是我在看别人修改文章的时候，语法可能是正确的，但是读起来不是很优美和连贯。
Especially when I see the text of someone else, who corrected the other articles. The grammar seems to be right, however the semantic is not coherent and neither beautiful.
你们觉得呢？
How about you?

通过修改作文引发的感想

首先，我很讶异有那么多世界各地的朋友来此学习语言。
First of all, I was surprised that there are so many people all friends around the word come here and to learn languages.
但是，我发现每个人的语言能力不尽相同。
But the However, language abilities in each of us may are different.
所以，有时候我会很困惑，不知道谁说的更准确些。
So, Hence there are sometimes when I'm get confused, because as I do not know who's whose answer is more accurately.

特别是我在看别人修改文章的时候，语法可能是正确的，但是读起来不是很优美和连贯。
This is especially so when I see essay corrections than seemed to be grammatically correct but upon reading it, does not seem to be elegant nor coherent.  found someone who corrected other's article the grammar seems right, however,the semantic was not coherence and not very beautiful.
你们觉得呢？
How about you? What do you think? 那你就要定夺 改文章者的学文的深淺了.

Firs of all, I was surprised that there are so many people all around the word came here and learn languages.

First of all, I was surprised that there are so many people all around the world who come here to learn languages.

But the language Abilities of us may different.

But our language abilities may differ.

So, sometimes I'm confused, because I do not know who's answer is more accurately.

So, sometimes I'm confused, because I do not know whose answer is more accurate.

Especially when I found someone who corrected other's article the grammar seems right, however,the semantic was not coherence and not very beautiful.

Especially when I found someone who correct another person's article - the grammar seems right, however, the sentence was not very easy to understand or beautiful.

你们觉得呢？
How about you?

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You did a really great job here! Your vocabulary is great. English is a very broad language and we have lots of ways to say things. So please do not be discouraged when you get several different corrections for your journal entries.

Remember, the best way to improve your English is to keep speaking English and keep exposing yourself to English media: newspapers, TV, movies.