About my hometown

Hello everyone, Merry Christmas! Today, I would like to speak about my hometown. My hometown is Ehime prefecture, but I'm living in Kanagawa and commute to University.

Ehime's staple product is an orange. This orange is more outstandingly delicious than other prefecture's oranges.

And then, Ehime has the most oldest spa(温泉onsen)　in Japan. This spa's name is DOGO ONSEN. (道後温泉） Dogo onsen is very popular with tourists from abroad.

I love Ehime. If you will visit Japan,please come to Ehime^^

Hello Kyosuke,

Thank you for your Christmas wishes, I wish the same for you too.

Just a few small corrections, we do not say 'most' and another superlative adjective. We use 'most' with adjectives which are two syllables or longer. (Not two syllables ending -y!) We don't use a capital letter after a comma. Only a full stop, exclamation mark or question mark.

All the best.

About my hometown

Hello everyone, merry Christmas! Today,I would like to speak/write about my hometown. My hometown is Ehime prefecture, But(but) I'm living in Kanagawa to so I can commute to my University.

Ehime's staple product is(are) oranges. This(The) oranges here is(are) outstandingly more delicious than other prefecture's(prefectures') oranges.

And thenAlso, Ehime has the most oldest spa(温泉onsen)　in Japan. This spa's name is DOGO ONSEN. (道後温泉）. Dogo onsen is very popular with tourists from abroad.

I love Ehime. If you will visit japan, please come by Ehime^^