Red means, remove, blue means I have changed

About me!

Hello, my name is David. I'm 14 years old boy...
Questions for me:
Where are you from?
I come from Recife, Brazil, and it is beautiful here!

How is it there?
Well, it is beautiful here. We have beaches, shopping, and other things... hahaha

*I don't write in english* :(

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Explanations:

1) "I'm 14 years old boy..." - This should be either "I'm 14 years old" as indicated below, or "I'm a 14 year old boy". They way that you have it written, "14 years old" is a description of the singular noun "boy" so "years" should also be singular - "year". If you remove "boy" it is okay because now "14 years old" is not describing a noun, and it is multiple years.

2) "I come from Brazil, in Recife" - In English we usually say "city, country", or "smallest area, bigger area, biggest area". For example, "I am from Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada". I had city, province, country. So you could change yours to "I come from Recife, Brazil". You can also say "I am from Recife, Brazil"

3) "here is beautiful" - should be changed. It is clear what you mean, but it sounds strange. It would be better as "it is beautiful here". A bit advanced now, but doing this also creates two independant clauses, which means we need a conjunction or a semi-colon. I added "and" which is a conjunction, but saying "I come from Recife, Brazil; it is beautiful here!" is also correct.

4) "How are there" - should be "how is it there", or "What is it like there"

5) "Well, here is beauty" - Should be "Well, it is beautiful here."

6) "have beach, have shopping and others" - would be a bit better if it was "We have beaches, shopping, and other things". The comman between "shopping" and "and" is optional and is called an oxford comma.

Good job, and keep learning :)